2021年12月4日托福综合写作回忆和解析含范文

　　2021年12月4日托福写作回忆和解析含范文   本文由环球教育成都学校李丹老师整理提供，对于本次写作的综合点评：这次托福考试写作部分整体难度适中。其中，综合写作考查天文类，整体难度中等偏上。

　　独立写作考查友谊类话题，重复2021.11.14原题，虽然有点抽象，但是还是一道比较好写的题目，建议考生在备考过程中尽量多积累一些话题相关素材，更能沉着应对各类话题考试。

　　综合写作

　　话题分类天文类

　　考题回忆总论点火星探测器是降落在赤道（equator）还是极地（pole）好？

　　阅读部分阅读认为降落在赤道更好：

　　1. 极地太冷，赤道温度适宜，不会损害设备

　　2. 因为rotation离赤道距离更近，在赤道返回更省燃料

　　3. 赤道的阳光可以看清surface

　　听力部分反驳：

　　1. 赤道温度波动大，热胀冷缩造成设备开裂

　　2. 因为燃料不能从地球带，所以要用水制造，极地有冰形式的水，赤道没有水

　　3. 赤道辐射大，对设备损害，极点可以用冰做墙，block辐射

　　解题思路传统四段式写作，每一段阅读内容+听力内容，注意细节和同义替换

　　参考范文Both the reading and the lecture are talking about the landing site on Mars. The author of the reading claims that the equator is better than the poles, while the lecturer challenges this perspective by providing three reasons.

　　The reading first points out that the poles are too cold whereas the temperature of the equator is more suitable, which will not damage the equipment. The lecturer, however, rebuts this by mentioning that due to temperature fluctuations, expansion and contraction will easily cause cracking and so do harm to the equipment.

　　Secondly, the reading passage conceives that the equator is closer, so it will save more fuels when the probe returns to the Earth. The listening, by contrast, says that because Mars probe cannot bring fuels from the Earth, they need to be produced by water, which could be provided by the ice on the poles. The equator on the Mars, however, does not have water at all.

　　In the final analysis, the writer in the reading asserts that if the probes lands on the equator, with sufficient sunshine, it is easier to see the surface of the Mars. The professor in the lecture says that despite that, the tremendous radiation from the equator is detrimental to the equipment. If the probe lands on the poles, the ice could be used as walls to block the radiation, in which this problem could be solved.