2021年11月13日托福独立写作回忆和解析含范文！
2021年11月13日托福独立写作回忆和解析含范文！本文由环球教育南京学校李敏老师提供，本次考试综合点评：这次托福考试写作部分整体难度适中。
其中，综合写作考查天文类，围绕火星是否有液态水展开讨论。这个主题虽然有些难度，但是听力、阅读和综合写作的练习题中都出现过，认真做过练习的同学应该还是比较容易掌握内容的。
独立写作考查家庭教育类话题，绝对词题，同学们对这类题型还比较熟悉。类似的题目在2015年出现过。
独立写作
话题分类家庭教育类
考题回忆Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？
The best way for parents to teach their children about responsibility is to ask them to care for an animal.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
解题思路类似题目在2015年也出现过
【20150704】Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？
Children can benefit in important ways from taking care of a pet animal.
题目出现the best way绝对词，可以从other ways to cultivate responsibility出发去反驳。
1.让步
对方观点：agree
对方前提条件：可以通过喂食，清洁，洗澡等方式培养责任感
反驳：
1）即使真的可以培养孩子的责任感，也不代表这是最佳方式
2）养宠物也有风险，比如动物可能会伤到孩子
2.从children的角度
1）因为有些孩子还很小，并不是很会照顾小动物，所以很有可能关注点都放在了和动物玩上，导致最后并没有学到如何照顾动物，反而沉迷于玩乐。这样的话，优点就不突出了，不能称为最佳方式。
3.从other ways的角度
1）培养责任感不仅限于照顾小动物，其实也可以通过分担父母的负担来培养。比如，平时承担家务活，整理自己的房间，自己洗自己的衣服等，也可以帮助孩子培养自己的事应该自己做的责任感。并且，这种情况下，孩子做的都是力所能及的事，比较容易完成。
参考范文范文：
The society has an increasing demand for responsible citizens. Unfortunately, not everyone is capable of carrying responsibilities. The cultivation of such ability involves a complicated range of elements, including patience, meticulous cares and whole-hearted devotions. As a result, it is extremely necessary to teach children to be responsible before they grow up. Looking after animals could be an effective way to achieve such a goal, but it may not be the best way. I will further elaborate my viewpoint as follows.
Admittedly, taking good care of others is a primary step to become a responsible individual. Just like a baby who lives under the endless care from its mother, an animal also relies largely on the affectionate care from its owner. If a child has been given the chance to play the role of a little father or mother, he or she would have a further comprehension about what love and care really mean. This child may be determined to render the greatest care to the animal and try to make it healthier and stronger. In fact, such a psychological feedback is helpful to children's mental growth and prepares them for greater responsibilities.
However, this approach has its flaws. A simple task as it seems, raising animals requires not only sense of responsibility but also feeding skills and other abilities. As children are not fully eligible to take care of animals, they may not succeed in raising animals on their own. For example, my nephew kept some goldfish in a beautiful tank when he was seven years old. He fed them and cleaned the tank regularly before a fish died of a disease that was not detected in time. It cast a serious blow to him and discouraged him from feeding animals anymore. It was a signal that he became less willing to take responsibilities than before. This unexpected result clearly suggests the risk of asking children to take care of animals. In some other cases, children do not fail in feeding animals, but they just like playing with these animals rather than taking the responsibility of caring for them, leading to neglectable effect of this method.
Compared with nurturing small animals, some methods are more convenient and effective in fostering children’s sense of responsibility. Assigning children regular chores is an excellent option. A child at the age of four or above is capable of doing some housework, such as tidying his or her room, cleaning bowls and plates, doing his or her own laundry. By fulfilling these tasks, they may take pride in being considered mature enough to take care of themselves and share the responsibility of the family. Since the house chores chosen for them to do are not beyond their capabilities, the risk of being frustrated and disheartened from taking responsibilities will be reduced.
In brief, taking care of an animal presents to children the nature of responsibility, but it may not be the best choice because it has some drawbacks. Parents can draw on other ways to achieve better effects.
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