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11月6日雅思大作文外教范文分享!学习一下吧!

2021-11-09 17:37:23编辑:素素

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11月6日雅思大作文外教范文分享!学习一下吧!
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  作文题目:

  Many people use social media every day to get in touch with other people and news events, do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages?

  题型类别:讨论利弊

  题材类别:科技媒体类

  类似旧题:

  The use of social media,such as Facebook,Twitter,are replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

  高分范文:

  Many people use social media every day to get in touch with other people and news events. Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages?

  In the present-day information era, social media has become a societal need whereby individuals of all walks of life communicate and learn about the world through similar online platforms. Whether or not this phenomenon is beneficial or detrimental will be discussed.

  There is no doubt that social media can allow users from all pockets of the globe to get together and share information instantaneously. Families, friends and even strangers can connect easily and rapidly through the usage of social media and they can share photos, videos as well as information with one another at any time of the day. News from various locations can be viewed and shared through social media, which allows people to catch up on current events fairly quickly. Social media is also a fantastic method of educating the public in terms of the latest stories and newsworthy articles as they can reach people’s smartphones as soon as they are published.

  On the contrary, social media has led to a huge loss of productivity and efficiency for workers and students, particularly as millions of individuals have become addicted to such platforms. This addiction leads users to spend hours on social media apps and websites, leading to a decrease in health, particularly when it comes to eyesight. Youngsters are becoming myopic at an earlier age as well as at an alarming rate compared to the past, leading to a public health crisis the world over. Finally, social media has led to stunting the communication skills of youngsters, rendering them unable to carry on simple conversations with others.

  All in all, social media can be seen as a blessing as well as a curse due to its various pros and cons. Whether or not the advantages outweigh the disadvantages depends on each individual user’s ability to control themselves and the subsequent health effects realised.

  (In total:  305 words)

  范文由环球教育加拿大国籍外教 Khalid Hasmath 老师本人执笔创作,仅供学术交流。