2021年9月5日托福写作【综合写作】回忆和解析含范文！

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　　本次托福考试综合点评

　　这次托福考试写作部分整体难度适中，独立写作重复2021.5.22考题，是经常出现的一个题目。

　　其中，综合写作考查动物环境类，整体难度适中。

　　综合写作

　　话题分类动物环境类

　　考题回忆总论点象牙嘴woodpecker几十年前被认为已经灭绝了，但是最近又发现它们仍然存在，并且有photos和sound为证。

　　阅读部分分论点一：实际上是另外一种woodpecker，它们很像，从照片中不能分辨它们的特征

　　分论点二：科学家没有发现woodpecker的nest，所以缺少evidence。

　　分论点三：那些声音可能是其他鸟类的叫声，也可能是woodpecker大声敲击树木，显示领地，所以无法与枪声分辨。

　　听力部分分论点一：拍摄birds之间的differentiation有一定的难度。拍摄者是专业的birds experts，他们亲眼看到区别，不可能认错。

　　分论点二：这种birds的种群密度很低，占据空间广，nests间隔在25平方公里的范围，所以在大森林里搜寻不到很正常。

　　分论点三：birds的声音很特别，不可能是其他species的birds，而且那一带人很少，不会是gunshots声音。

　　解题思路阅读部分

　　1. 另外一种woodpecker

　　2. 没发现nest

　　3.其他birds或者gunshot

　　听力部分

　　1. 拍摄differentiation有难度，experts亲眼区分

　　2. birds占据空间广，找不到很正常

　　3. birds声音特别，不是别的birds或gunshot声音

　　参考范文范文:

　　Both the reading and the listening discuss about ivory-billed woodpecker. The reading raises three arguments to prove that the picture might be another kind of woodpecker, while the lecturer holds a viewpoint that they still exist with the proof of photographs and sound even if they were thought to be extinct several decades ago.

　　First, as the reading suggests, it is another kind of woodpecker and they resemble each other, so scientists cannot differentiate the difference between them. However, the listening points out that taking the photograph of the differentiation between birds is difficult, and birds experts observe them in person so it should be real.

　　Second, the reading mentions that scientists cannot find the nest of woodpeckers so it lacks evidence. The listening, on the other hand, argues that the density of these birds species are low and they occupy a large space, therefore it is very common that you cannot find a woodpecker nest.

　　Third, the reading passage suggests that those sounds could be the calls of other birds, or woodpeckers tapping loudly on trees to show territory, so they're indistinguishable from gunshots. On the contrary, the lecturer argues that the sound of this bird is very special and it will not be other bird species, meanwhile there are very few people and it cannot be gunshots.

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