雅思大作文7分范文及解析：大人是否应该阻止孩子犯错

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　　Some people think children have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

　　题目来源：2021年8月7日大陆雅思大作文

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　　There is a belief that children can be allowed to learn from mistakes, while others convict that they should be prevented from doing something wrong. From my perspective, I would agree with the view to provide children with opportunities to experience setbacks.

　　On the one hand, there are reasons as to why some people place high emphasis on parents deterring children from making errors. For those who think in this way, they assume that the key role of parents is to cultivate their loved ones to be perfect from childhood. With this in mind, they consider it necessary for parents to interfere in all stages of children’s development, with the goal of removing all obstacles in their children’s lives.

　　While the above statement does have its plausibility, I would agree with the opinion that children deserve their freedom to experience setbacks. It is imperative to recognize that those devotees of parental interference have based their conclusion on their preferred supposition about what is conducive to children’ development. Instead of trying to be perfect and avoid frustration, what is more meaningful to younger generations is to have opportunities to experience failures and therefore to learn from mistakes. Only by such experience can they build more qualities needed in their future careers, whether these be resilience or self-reliance in dealing with tricky conditions; by contrast, those don't have chances to fail or struggle tend to have lower self-esteem and under-developed problem-solving skills.

　　From what has been discussed above, it is my conclusion therefore, parents ought to allow children the freedom to learn from mistakes.

　　相关词汇和语法结构

　　Setback / frustration  挫折

　　Obstacle  障碍

　　Deter  阻止

　　Interfere  干涉

　　Resilience  韧性

　　Self-esteem  自信