6.26托福写作【独立写作】回忆和解析含范文！

　　2021年6月26日托福写作【独立写作】回忆和解析含范文！本文由环球教育沈阳学校张雪老师整理点评，并为大家提供了参考范文，供学习！更多托福备考干货，请关注环球教育，环球开设托福培训课程，有需要可在线预约试听

　　综合点评

　　本次综合写作重复2019.7.7考题，涉及政府决策，该话题在托福考试中占比不高，听力和阅读是相互反驳的，难点在于把握听力中的细节信息。

　　另外，独立写作属于高频考察的教育类话题，也是经典考题类型三选一，要看准题目核心词，审题不要跑题。

　　独立写作

　　话题分类教育类

　　考题回忆Which value should be shared by children (5-10 years old) most and why?

　　- Being honest

　　- Being helpful to others

　　- Being well-organized

　　解题思路观点：从小要培养的最重要的品质是honesty。

　　主体段一：honesty 是人们一生都需要遵守的准则，从小培养这一品质对自己和对社会都

　　有好处;

　　主体段二：being helpful 对小孩来说可能心有余而力不足，小孩心智不成熟，难以给出很

　　大的帮助;Being organized 反而可能会限制小孩天马行空的想法，不利于小孩的发展;

　　参考范文It is widely acknowledged that valuable qualities should be inculcated in children as early as possible, since younger children tend to be molded more easily by the outside world than older ones. Among the three possible values—being helpful, being honest and being well organized— I reckon honesty the most important trait that children should develop from a young age.

　　Honesty is without a doubt the basic principle that every individual should live by all along one’s life. Fostering this quality in young children would yield the most benefits not only for themselves but also for the community. For one thing, being honest is one of the most important considerations in any relationships, in the promotion of employees, and in the election of leaders, etc. It is not an overstatement that honesty is a prerequisite of a promising future, and there is every reason to share with young children. For another thing, dishonesty can erode any organization. For example, a person who discloses the company’s confidential information to a competitor might be the one who lied about the unfinished homework to teachers at a young age. With no warning or punishment, children might deem it not big deal to lie and have little awareness of how severe it is. One can be less helpful or not organized but being dishonest would be disastrous. Therefore, it is imperative to educate children to be honest; the earlier, the better.

　　On the other hand, it is not that realistic to expect children between five and ten years old to be a big help or do things in a well-organized way. Children at this age are usually not physically or mentally mature to comprehend complex issues or figure out feasible solutions. The fact is that these abilities can only be obtained through real life experience, rather than through instructions from the elders.

　　Furthermore, I doubt, to some extent, whether being well organized is of benefit to children because the children’s nature of curiosity and free-thinking may be restricted. Indeed, children should not be deprived of their own way to see the world or do things, be it ridiculous or not, since this is how imagination and creativity flourish.

　　In conclusion, regarding the most favorable qualities that children should develop, I believe honesty should be given top priority. The reason is that honesty lays the foundation of the prosperity of both individuals and society, while the other two qualities (being helpful and well organized) are likely either to be unrealistic or to restrict children’s development.