2021年06月19日托福写作独立写作回忆和解析含范文

　　2021年06月19日托福写作独立写作回忆和解析含范文

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　　综合点评

　　这次托福考试写作部分整体难度中等偏上。

　　其中，综合写作考查植物mangroves红树林的保护方法，难度适中。

　　但是，独立写作考查偏难，出现一道全新题目。

　　独立写作

　　话题分类历史是否能帮助解决现在和未来的问题

　　考题回忆Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In order to solve the problems of the present and future, it is necessary to review and understand the past.

　　解题思路写作思路：

　　要点：这道题目可以从分析历史入手，我们把历史进行拆分，发现历史包括了人物传记、科学发明、政策规则、战争、疾病、饥荒等。根据这些可以想到历史给人类带来成功的经验、失败的教训、和发展前进的动力等。如果选择不回顾历史，那么可以考虑现在和过去的区别，例如意识不同、科技发展水平不同、经济水平状况不同等。全篇文章即可以选择“一边倒”结构，也可以选择“折中式”，本次采取“一边倒”结构来构思全文展开。

　　观点：

　　模式一

　　总论点：同意题目观点

　　分论点一 ：可以学习成功经验；

　　分论点二： 可以避免同样的错误；

　　分论点三：可以获得取得成绩的动力。

　　模式二

　　总论点：反对题目观点

　　分论点一：可以用更先进的方式解决（例如，科技）；

　　分论点二：可以考虑符合现在的情况（例如，经济水平）；

　　分论点三：可以考虑符合最新要求（例如，人类意识的改变）。

　　参考范文People nowadays are confronting all kinds of problems every day and how to solve them could be very critical for individuals to enjoy their present and future. Therefore, it is natural for people to pay much attention to tackling their problems. Some people claim that it is more significant for people to use the latest approaches to resolving problems rather than obtaining inspirations from the history. However, from my perspective, it is a better way of addressing issues by learning from the past. (83 words).

　　To begin with, the past could provide people in modern society with appropriate experiences. For example, in 1978, China proposed and adopted the policy of reform and opening-up and in 1980 the Shenzhen Special Economic Zone was launched by the state government. In order to improve the living standards of the Chinese people and enhance the national economy, Deng Xiaoping implemented this policy. This policy successfully provided the Chinese people with booming job opportunities and salary. With an increase of income for every Chinese family, the demands for products and services improved as well, which finally pushed the nation forward. This could be a great lesson for the mankind all around the world when they meet up with a similar situation. However, if understanding the past is underestimated, people may have to come up with their own ideas every time, which may not surely bring the satisfactory results. Thus, studying the history could offer great help in addressing the contemporary issues. (161 words)

　　Furthermore, the lessons from the previous years could enable individuals to avoid making the same mistakes. For instance, when my elder brother was about to take the national examinations to the Chinese colleges, he was solely attracted by a well-known university and kept telling himself that this was his only dream university. The obsession was so intense that he ignored other famous universities nationwide. Unfortunately, after taking the exams, he ended up with being admitted to a university which was not as prestigious as he had wanted. This experience could demonstrate that students should be more flexible and be open to more choices or possibilities, which could actually bring them a better result than they have originally thought. By contrast, not having this lesson may increase the chance of making the same errors, because it is human nature to be obsessed with something they prefer and forget about their other choices. (151 words)

　　Last, people could attain motivations from the history. It is typical that solving a problem is never easy and sometimes it may take a long time and much money. One example is that in order to be enrolled in a prestigious university worldwide, a Chinese student usually takes years of efforts. To be more specific, Chinese students need to get a satisfactory mark in TOEFL in Grade 9 and obtain a good score in ACT or SAT in Grade 10. What’s more, they also need to work hard on AP exams so that they should not fall behind among peers on campus. After completing all the tasks effectively, students will still need to prepare all types of essays, interviews, and subject competitions, etc. for application procedures. Without strong motivations, it may be difficult for any teenager to preserve in their attempts and those role models in the past could actually help them keep motivated and self-confident, since the past was full of successful historical cases. Just as an old saying goes that one minute’s brilliant performance on the stage takes a decade’s practice under the stage. Learning about the hard work that those historical figures had put in before they obtained their achievement could encourage the modern students to keep calm and carry on. (214 words)

　　In conclusion, since the historical events could provide people with the lessons, experiences and motivations, it is vital for people to learn from the past to solve the problems at present. (31 words)

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