2021年4月25日托福考试综合写作回忆和解析含范文,本文由环球教育 北京学校王辰 老师整理点评,王老师对本次托福考试写作部分的综合点评:本次综合写作不是常规的听力反驳阅读的题型,而是少见的“现象证明类”题型,值得关注。独立写作属于政府社会类话题,是老题,难度不大。
综合写作
话题分类生物类
考题回忆总论点一种叫guillemot的鸟的蛋非常unique。
阅读部分喝牛奶不好:1. 这种鸟的蛋很花,但是不知道原因;2. 蛋很粗糙,但是不知道为什么;3. 蛋的表面很皱,但是不知道原因。
听力部分给出原因:1. 蛋花,因为住的鸟多,为了更容易找到蛋;2. 蛋粗糙,是因为蛋的表面脏,这会让小鸟呼吸不了,但是雨水能把脏东西冲掉,如果蛋的表面很滑就不行了;3. 蛋皱,是因为当大鸟把蛋窝在怀里的时候,shape会非常合适,这样更能keep the egg warm。
解题思路传统四段式写作,每一段阅读内容+听力内容。
参考范文According to the passage, eggs of a kind of bird Guillemot are very unique. The lecture gives reasons for all the three attributes of the egg respectively.
For starters, to quote the passage, there are a lot of special colors and patterns on the surface ot the egg. The lecturer indicates that Guillemot lives with a lot of birds, and the colors and patterns help Guillemot identify their eggs.
In addition, the reading suggests that the surface of Guillemots’ eggs is quite rough. According to the lecture, the surface of the egg is dirty, and that can make the newly born birds unable to breathe. But the rain can wash away the dirt because the egg is rough, which cannot be realized if the surface of the egg is slippery,
Finally, it is mentioned by the writer that the surface of the egg is wrinkled. In light of the lecture, the wrinkled surface would make the shape of the egg extremely suitable when a mature Guillemot holds the egg in its arms, which would help keep the egg warm.
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