2021年5月8日托福【独立写作】回忆和解析含范文

　　2021年5月8日托福【独立写作】回忆和解析含范文，本文由环球教育 武汉学校龚朝辉 整理点评，本次托福考试写作综合点评，这次托福考试写作部分整体难度适中。更多托福备考干货，请关注环球教育，环球托福提分课程正在火热报名中，有需要的同学可以联系网站客服预约试听哦

　　综合写作重复 2016年12月11日的题目,独立写作重复2016年12月10日和2019年1月12日旧题。

　　独立写作

　　话题分类生活类话题，重复2016年12月10日/2019年1月12日

　　考题回忆Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

　　It is better to travel abroad to visit foreign countries/travel abroad when you are younger rather than when you are older.

　　Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

　　解题思路写作思路：

　　本题是二选一，可以选择一边倒。话题比较个人化，观点不难想。本题探讨出国旅行对人的影响，可以从人生观形成（对不同文化的理解）、学业发展、外语技能、职业发展等方面去分析。还可以考虑身体健康/体能因素。这里选择几个容易写的观点。

　　总论点：年轻的时候出国旅行更好。

　　分论点一：年轻时候出国有利于外语提升。

　　分论点二：年轻时候出国有利于职业发展。

　　分论点三：年轻时出国更能应对旅行的挑战（如应对紧急情况的能力）。（篇幅所限，可以不写）

　　参考范文范文：

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

　　It is better to travel abroad to visit different/foreign countries when you are younger rather than when you are older. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

　　In this highly interconnected world, it is quite common for people to travel overseas, and this is partly due to the availability of efficient transportation vehicles such as airplanes and high-speed trains. Faced with the choice between traveling abroad at a younger age and traveling overseas an older age, I prefer to travel abroad when I am younger.

　　First, traveling to foreign countries when I am younger helps to improve my foreign language skills. An overseas trip not only creates a pressing need for people to improve foreign language skills prior to the trip but also creates plenty of opportunities for them to hone language skills by using the foreign language while visiting a different country. For example, a few years ago when I was making the plan of traveling to the UK, I realized that I needed to significantly improve my English skills to reduce the risk of potential language-induced misunderstandings, so I spent more time every day on English learning. Furthermore, improvements in my English (particularly in listening and speaking) also occurred when I was using the English language to communicate with local people in everyday situations. Although this linguistic benefit that comes with overseas trips applies to virtually all people regardless of age, the benefit is probably greater for younger people who need better language skills for utilitarian purposes (e.g. landing a job at a multinational corporation) than older people.

　　Second, traveling to different countries at a younger age may generate career advancement opportunities that we can take advantage of later in life. For example, in my country many people have become highly successful business owners because their earlier overseas experiences afforded them the opportunity to find a niche in the market that they filled later. My friend Vivian is particularly good case in point. She visited a number of countries in her twenties on vacation trips, and during her stay in those countries, she realized, incidentally, that a large number of local people were interested in Chinese–style jewelry and that she could profit from promoting jewelry products with traditional Chinese cultural flavor to cater for the customers’ needs. After returning to China, she quit her stable job at a large state-owned enterprise and set up her own jewelry trade company, which is now thriving. Had she chosen to travel abroad at a later time, she might not have retained the compelling drive and stamina needed for starting her own business.

　　In summary, while there are certainly benefits that people can gain from traveling overseas when they are older, it seems to be me that traveling abroad at a younger age is more advisable. This is because by doing so, I can gain enormous benefits such as boosting foreign language proficiency and improving career prospects. (459 words)

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