12月26日雅思考试|大作文范文及解析,此次雅思写作题目大意:在很多国家,人们更多穿西式服装(西装和牛仔裤)而不是他们的传统服装。其原因是什么?这样的趋势是积极的还是消极的?
大作文题目:
In many countries, people wear more western-style clothes (suits and jeans) than their traditional clothes.
Why is this happening? Is it a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
【话题分类】:社会生活类
【题目解析】:
从题型看,这个题目是一道“two-question essay”,要求考生回答两个问题。在回答第一个问题“why”时,建议考生呈现两个ideas并作出详细的解释和论证;同时,表达 “positive/negative trend” 观点时,采用“一边倒”的方式会较为简单和直接,给出两个理由并作出相应的解释即可。
【写作思路】:
开头段:改写题目 + 文章结构
主体段1:回答题目中第一个问题,即“why”
1)西方时尚服装的巨大影响;
2)西式服装的便利特质
主体段2:回答题目中第二个问题,即“positive/negative trend”
totally believe “negative”的原因 ---
1)影响本国文化传承;
2)打击本国传统服装业
结尾段:总结全文内容(改写主体第一段和主体第二段的主要内容)
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【参考范文】
Individuals in many nations prefer clothing derived from western countries instead of dressing themselves in clothing based on their culture. This essay will initially discuss the causes of this trend, followed by my firm opinion that it is an adverse development.
There are mainly two factors behind people’s increased predisposition for wearing western-style attire rather than their traditional garments. The first thing to consider is the heavy influence of western fashion. The popular ways westerners dress themselves has not only been introduced to the rest of the world via multifarious media resources by globalisation but also excessively promoted, making it possible for non-westerners to imitate the styles and give up their traditional clothing. Additionally, western wear is generally more convenient regarding people’s everyday activities. Western-style clothes are known to be simple in design and easy to wear. Hence, people normally do not need to spend much time dressing themselves up by putting on jeans or T-shirts before going out. In contrast, wearing Japanese Kimono, for example is quite time-consuming.
However, whatever reasons are provided, I strongly believe negative consequences will eventually be entailed. Firstly, the passing down of local cultures can be detrimentally impacted. If fewer people wear their traditional clothes, the specific cultures embedded in the costumes will be overlooked. An obvious illustration is that many young people in China do not understand the meanings of the cheongsam and what this clothing truly represents. Secondly, the traditional clothing industry may suffer economically. Factories manufacturing traditional clothes cannot sell out their products, let alone make profits. That is why many enterprises of this kind have gone bankrupt.
In conclusion, the tremendous effect of western fashion and the convenience of western-style clothes lead to people choosing to wear more clothes from the west. Despite these reasons, I completely argue this situation will result in negative outcomes, including stopping indigenous cultures from being passed down to future generations and causing damage to the local traditional clothing industry.
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