雅思大作文范文分析-汽车or自行车

　　雅思大作文范文分析-汽车or自行车  “城市出行，汽车好还是自行车好”是2018年在其他考区出现过的一道雅思G类大作文题目。

　　本期，组长搬运英国雅思教师Liz的同主题范文并进行分析，供大家提升对TR和CC的认识，并积累观点和表达。

　　​以下内容不只可以用于写作，还可以用于口语，多学多记，一举两得，老问捷径，其实路就在脚下，just迈开步子

　　Some people believe that travelling within a city is better by car while some other think bicycle is a better means. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

　　People hold different opinions about whether a car or a bicycle is the best form of transport in a city. I believe within the city centre a bicycle is best, but a car is better if someone must travel further.

　　On the one hand, it is commonly thought that a car is the best option for transport in a city as it offers great comfort in terms of seating, air conditioning and other features. A further reason for people preferring cars is that they caneasily transport a number of people at the same time and is especially safe for children. Cars are,moreover, time effective, being able to cover long distances in less time.

　　On the other hand, bicycles are healthier options for getting around a city centreaccording to some. The majority of people lead a sedentary life style with little or no exercise which can cause serious health problems. This is often due to the lack of time available in their daily routine for exercise. By using a bicycle to travel, people will get the necessary physical activities without any inconvenience.

　　Finally, in my opinion, bicycles are certainly an asset in a city centre where traffic jams are frequent. They can pass through congestion with minimal effort and offer health benefits.However, if a person lives in the suburbs, the most logical option would be a car for travelling longer distances into the city centre, particularly with more than one person to transport.

　　In conclusion, both bicycles and cars offer advantages depending on whether the travel is only with the city centre or outside the centre. However, for families travelling together, a car will always be the best option.

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　　分析：这篇范文结构清晰，语言流畅，TR方面充分回应了写作任务，CC方面中心句简洁明确、连接词使用自然，LR方面使用了各种话题相关词汇和短语，GRA方面准确使用了各种从句、比较级、被动语态、情态动词等语法结构。G友们可以多读几遍，结合以上分析，背记词汇短语，目标6分可以关注开头段、结尾段以及各主体段中心句的写法，目标7分可做互译练习，细致分析段内句间的连接方式，长句结构，以及各种介词、短语搭配的正确使用方式。