雅思G类小作文真题8分范文分析-写给餐厅经理的信

　　雅思G类小作文真题8分范文分析-写给餐厅经理的信  本期，小编搬运剑10-B小作文8分范文和考官评语过来，大家注意结合考官评语理解评分标准，并学习与餐厅有关的故事情节及词汇短语。

　　You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with the food and service.

　　Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter：

　　-give details of your visit to the restaurant

　　-explain the reason for the celebration

　　-say what was good about the food and the service

　　考官评语：考生自然地回应了所有写作任务，其中两个拓展很充分。在开头和结尾提到了庆祝原因，但是可以更充分地展开。语言流畅，有逻辑地组织了想法，行文连贯。分段充分，但3个单句段应整合到某个段落。词汇丰富准确。有几个拼写错误，但不影响理解。语法丰富准确灵活。标点和语法使用准确无误。

　　小编说明：下划线标记为拼写错误。

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I am writing to you to express my delight with the excellent service andhigh quality of food that your restaurant provides us last Saturday night, on the occasion of my 50th birthday.

　　We were a party of twelve, which included my family, close friends and collegues from work. Your staff went out of their way to provide seating arrangements that were easily accessible, and did not interfere with other diners. I find that this is unusual in many restaurants these days. The waiters were extremely professional and polite, and were obviously experienced as they did not encroach too much on the procedings.

　　Your current menu offers a great deal of choice, as does your wine list, and everything was available. There were no complaints about the quality or quantity of the dishes served, and the presentation of each dish was akin to the dishes produced in shows such as 'Master Chef'.

　　I ordered the rack of pork ribs, which was deliciously succulent and, if anything, maybe slightly too large. Nevertheless, I managed to finish it！

　　I was similarly impressed with the large variety of local and International wines available. The wine that was ordered arrived at the correct temperature that each wine should be consumed at. The waiters were familiar with the etiquette of drinking and enjoying fine wines; and the service was paramount.

　　All-in-all, our group enjoyed a delicious meal at your establishment, and I had a very happy birthday.

　　Congratulations once again.

　　Yours sncerely

　　252 words

　　小编补充：这篇小作文的字数过多，对多数考生来说不切实际，在考场上，就字数而言，只要三个问题都以差不多的篇幅给出了较为细节的回应、总字数170-180即可。

　　注意积累餐厅情境相关的各种表达，特别是名词和形容词，如预定菜品，酒温，服务员态度，等。

　　大家可以把范文翻译成中文，然后对照自己的中文译文进行英文翻译，这个过程有助于发现自己对地道词汇和短语的掌握程度，提升英语表达的准确性，同时加深对话题词汇的理解和记忆。