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Online shopping is now replacing shopping in store. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
题目来源:2014年11月22日大陆雅思大作文
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It is increasingly common for people to go online to buy what they need rather than going to a shop. Although there are some dangers and disadvantages while shopping on the internet, I believe that it is a positive thing.
First of all, the main advantage is the convenience. People don’t have to go to shopping malls, instead, they can buy whatever they need just with a click of the mouse. Also, they can make their purchase at any time of day or night. This type of shopping is very beneficial for those with hectic lifestyles since it provides a good opportunity to save time and also avoid crowds.
In addition, online purchase tends to help people save money. The first reason is that internet companies don’t need a physical shop, and the products which they sell are often cheaper. Another reason is because customers can easily browse through dozens of different websites to find the best price. Of course, they can do the same at a mall, but it would take about an hour or longer.
However, there are two main problems. One is the Internet fraud. In other words, hackers may copy consumers’ credit card details and steal their money. A further disadvantage is that people cannot examine what they are buying immediately. This means that consumers may buy something they don’t really want.
In conclusion, online shopping has greater advantages due to the convenience and lower price. Although there are some disadvantages, they could be addressed by better management and after-sales service.
相关词汇和语法结构
With the click of a mouse 点一下鼠标
Physical shop 实体店
Internet fraud 网络诈骗
Hacker 电脑黑客
Hectic 繁忙的