雅思大作文最新考题精讲：当代名人是否能为年轻人做榜样？

　　雅思大作文最新考题精讲：当代名人是否能为年轻人做榜样？小烤鸭们好呀！一期一会，雅思大作文新题解析又来啦，承蒙不弃一路关注，话不多说，直接上干货

　　原题如下：

　　Nowadays, celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and some people say that this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 20201212

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　　作文解析

　　行文框架：

　　开头段：点明立场

　　主一段：重视了什么

　　主二段：忽视了什么

　　结尾段：重申立场

　　开头段：

　　The trend sweeping the globe in the era of the internet is that a growing number of celebrities, especially livestreamers and vloggers, are obsessed with showing their superior charm and enviable financial status all the time online. This, certainly, can bring them huge economic benefit, significant public attention, and great sense of achievement, but what they are doing is setting negative examples to the young generation.

　　主一段：

　　For one thing, seeing pictures and footage those famous personalities share on social media or reading coverage on their luxury lifestyle in the mass media, their young followers will inevitably raise the status of money and appearance in their value system. As a result, those youngsters are going to merely focus on how beautiful they look and how rich they are, therefore to some certain extent leading to the popularity of plastic surgery and the concept of excessive consumption. To be specific, their life path is distorted once they are only pursuing a good-looking face and an extravagant life.

　　主二段：

　　Worse still, those young people are losing the belief that working hard, determination, and diligence are what they exactly need to achieve their ambitions of life. That is why some students drop out of school since they are sure education can do nothing to change their life quality, but their pretty faces can greatly help them get a good job offer. Meanwhile, more and more young employees begin to complain about their jobs simply because they can just afford an economical sedan but not a limousine. Without the right direction or aims, they are lost in the crossroads of life.

　　结尾段：

　　In summary, without any doubt, the influencers of our society have the right to show whatever they own, but in the meantime, what is more significant for their young followers to know is how those celebrities earn the admirable lifestyle. This is what can greatly motivate, inspire and encourage the young to pursue the right thing in their life.

　　总结如下：

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