教育类雅思大作文高分范文：网络教育与传统教育的优势

　　教育类雅思大作文高分范文：网络教育与传统教育的优势  本文为大家分享第二篇范文，跟之前的观点稍有差别，大家也可以参考学习

　　Online courses are widely offered these days. Some people think it is a good way to study online, but Others think it is better to study in a classroom. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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　　审  题

　　这道题不难，教育类，网络教育与传统教育的优势。DG类的题目，个人观点可以有两种，一是偏向一方，二是都同意/都重要；写作结构可以采用4段式，开头段改述题目并给出个人观点，主体段1论述一方观点的原因/好处/合理性，主体段2论述另一方观点的原因/好处/合理性理由1，结尾段概括全文/重申个人观点。由于题目中有better，考生偏向一方，会显得观点更加清晰。

　　范文2：来自Simon，主题相同，题型不同

　　Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?

　　It is true that online courses are becoming a common feature of university education. While there are some drawbacks of internet-based learning, I would argue that there are far more benefits.

　　The main drawback of the trend towards online university courses is that there isless direct interaction. Students may not have the opportunity to engage face-to-face with their teachers, and will instead have to rely on written forms of communication. Similarly, those students who study online do not come into direct contact with each other, and this could have a negative impact on peer support,discussion and exchange of ideas. For example, whereas students on traditional courses can attend seminars and even discuss their subjects over coffee after lessons, online learners are restricted to chatting through website forum areas. These learners may also lack the motivation and element of competition that face-to-face group work brings.

　　In spite of the negatives mentioned above, I believe that online university courses are a positive development for several reasons. Firstly, they allow learners to work in aflexible way, meaning that they can work whenever and wherever are convenient, and they can cover the material at their own pace. Secondly, the cost of auniversity education can be greatly reduced, while revenues for institutions may increase as more students could be taught. Finally, online learning offers open access to anyone who is willing to learn, regardless of age, location,ability and background. For example, my uncle, who is 65 years old, has recently enrolled on an online MBA course in another country, which would have been impossible in the days before internet-based education.

　　In conclusion, while I recognize the possible disadvantages of online learning, I consider it to be a positive development overall.

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　　结构分析

　　（注意，写作任务是积极/消极，属于个人观点类题目）

　　开头段

　　改述题目并给出个人观点。

　　主体段1

　　坏处。缺少直接的互动。师生、生生之间缺乏见面机会，缺乏面对面小组学习可以带来的创新和竞争意识。

　　主体段2

　　好处。一是灵活，二是便宜，三是开放性。

　　结尾段

　　简单总结个人观点。