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Online courses are widely offered these days. Some people think it is a good way to study online, but Others think it is better to study in a classroom. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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审 题
这道题不难,教育类,网络教育与传统教育的优势。DG类的题目,个人观点可以有两种,一是偏向一方,二是都同意/都重要;写作结构可以采用4段式,开头段改述题目并给出个人观点,主体段1论述一方观点的原因/好处/合理性,主体段2论述另一方观点的原因/好处/合理性理由1,结尾段概括全文/重申个人观点。由于题目中有better,考生偏向一方,会显得观点更加清晰。
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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, whileothers argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.
There is an ever increasing use of technology, such as tablets and laptops, in the classroom. It is often argued that this is a positive development, whilst others disagree and think it will lead to adverse ramifications. This essay agrees that an increase in technology is beneficial to students and teachers. This essay will discuss both points of view.
It is clear that the internet has provided students with access to more informationthan ever before. Moreover, learners have the ability to research and learn about any subject at the touch of a button. It is therefore agreed that technology is a very worthwhile tool for education. Wikipedia is a prime example, where students can simply type in any keyword and gain access to in-depth knowledge quickly and easily.
However, many disagree and feel that technology deprives people of real human interaction. Human interaction teaches people valuable skills such as discourse, debate and empathy. Despite this, human interaction is still possible through the internet and this essay disagrees technology should be dismissed for this reason. For instance, Skype and Facebook make it possible for people to interact in ways that were never before possible.
In conclusion, while the benefits of technology, particularly the internet, allow students to tap in to limitless sources of information, some still feel that people should be wary of this new phenomenon and not allow it to curb face to face interaction. However, as long as we are careful to keep in mind the importance of human interaction in education, the educational benefits are clearly positive.
结构分析
开头段
改述题目并给出个人观点,预告全文。
主体段1
观点1:网络教育的好处。能获得更多信息,更容易,是有效的教育工具,以维基百科为例。
主体段2
观点2:网络教育的坏处并引出个人观点。网络教育减少人际交流,但是不能因此排除使用。以Skype和Facebook为例说明网络教育也可以实现互动。
结尾段
总结双方立场和个人观点。