雅思7分作文解析：键盘侠，来现实世界试试？
雅思7分作文解析：键盘侠，来现实世界试试？今天就让我来和大家伙唠一下“犯罪“类题目。以下内容由西蒙弗雷泽大学教育学硕士，英语专业8级，环球教育•华南总校人气雅思写作Johnson老师原创。
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Many people think there is a general increase of anti-social behavior and a lack of respect to
others, what do you think are the causes of this and how to improve it? What solutions can you suggest?
Hello各位亲爱的读者老铁，
这一类题目，难倒不少同学，因为谁有事儿没事去钻研“犯罪“ 玩儿呢， 对吧？相信考生里，大多数人都是不擅长这类题目的。这时候，找对老师来上课，就十分重要了。虽然老师也不是犯罪专家，但对这类题目有一定了解，就能轻而易举地把文章写好。
这类题目，其实也是有套路的，了解一下犯罪的常见原因和解决方案，就能回答到大多数的犯罪类题目。
有些同学这时候就会问，老铁，不对啊？这道题，不是问＂反社会“吗？怎么就变成“犯罪”了？这就是这道题的陷阱所在了，anti-social behavior，反社会行为，有些同学以为抑郁、内向、自闭，这些病理现象是“反社会”，这误会可闹大了， 这最多算是“无社交”行为。反社会行为，通常都是要作出些违反社会规则 、道德或法律的事，其中犯罪是最严重的反社会行为。（不喜欢社交的80线老网红表示躺着中枪。）
百度百科“反社会行为（Anti-social behaviour）指的是一种故意或非故意、不顾他人观感，而且可能对社会造成危害、无法增进公众福祉的行为。包括违法、犯罪行为和并不触犯法律但违反社会公德的行为。此类行为的特征是攻击他人。因此世界各国都在民事和刑事上修订反制反社会行为的条文。”
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第一段：交代背景，总结全文
第二段：回答第一问题（反社会-或犯罪增加的原因）
第三段：回答第一问题（更深层原因）
第四段：回答第二问题（解决方案）
第五段：总结
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Many people think there is a general increase of anti-social behavior and a lack of respect to
others, what do you think are the causes of this and how to improve it? What solutions can you suggest?
Anti-social behavior is increasingly common nowadays, but we can also take steps to reduce the harm that it does to the society. This essay will analyze the reasons for this phenomenon and the measures to address these problems.
Family and parents’ education are the main cause of the increase of anti-social behavior, which leads to the children’s lack of respect towards other people in their future. When children are still too young to tell right from wrong, many parents do not set a good example. They swear or even use violence to teach their children, who are excellent imitators, and they simply just copy their parents’ mode of solving problems when they grow up. It is no a surprise but unreasonable family education in the past that results in the common anti-social behavior in the modern society.
What is more, Internet is another major reason. Since the birth of Internet, having access to information, including the violent and disrespectful one, becomes unprecedently easy. After spending too much time on the Internet, many people sometimes forget that they are in the real world, which are filled with real people, who also have genuine feelings. Lack of authentic interactions makes people forget the importance of mutual respect.
To address this worrying issue, parents first need to behave politely in front of their children. Instead of having complaints, or simply whining against their children’s anti-social behavior, parents are supposed to behave as a responsible member of the society. As individuals, it is also essential for each of us to understand the difference between the cyber space and the real world. Some actions are probably acceptable online, but they are not the same in the real world, which may cause more serious anti-social behavior, such as physical conflicts or even crimes.
To conclude, parents can teach their children in a more reasonable way, and people need to be aware of the difference between the real world and Internet, so that we can have a society with less conflicts.
New words and expressions:
threat n. /v 威胁
violent adj. 暴力的
disrespectful adj. 不尊重人的
unprecedented adj. 前所未有的
