雅思G类小作文考题分析-退休聚会及礼物建议

　　雅思G类小作文考题分析-退休聚会及礼物建议  据G友分享，2020年12月12日出现的一道雅思G类机考小作文题目为：

　　Your manager is going to retire after 40 years of service. Write a letter to the assistant manager to suggest a retirement event.

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　　– Explain how he/she influenced you at work

　　– What kind of event do you suggest

　　– Propose a gift from the company

　　审题：写信给同事，是给认识人的正式信，语气要偏正式，用词不能过于口语化，落款用Yours sincerely. 话题与工作有关，是个挺贴近实际的场景，ideas不难想，可能会遇到“想说的东西不会写”的情况，考场上不要为此较劲，想个扣题又好写的物件即可。

　　范文：177 words

　　Dear Linda,

　　I am writing to share my suggestions about the retirement event we are planning for our manager, Mr. Smith.

　　Having been working with Mr. Smith for only 3 years, I am already deeply impressed with his efficient ways of working as well as his fruitful leadership. Also, Mr. Smith’s optimistic and positive attitude has inspired me to become more confident when facing challenges at work.

　　To express our thanks to Mr. Smith, I suggest to hold a retirement party for him at the Credit River Hotel. There is a spacious conference room that can accommodate all of our staff and it is close to our office so it will be time-saving for us to prepare for the event.

　　Additionally, I believe that we should give an unforgettable gift to Mr. Smith to memorize his 40 years of service in manufacturing industry. I suppose we could specially make a model of our representative product for him, with the company logo and his name on it.

　　I hope these ideas can be helpful.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Sam Jones