雅思小作文高分范文——地图题

　　雅思小作文高分范文——地图题。本题仍然是变迁类地图题，其解题要点是确定描述的顺序及各地点之间的位置关系。在描述这类地图题时，考生最好将地图上的所有细节信息都描述出来。

　　题目

　　The two maps below show road access to city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

　　Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (C13T1)

　　范文

　　How the route to a city hospital had changed from 2007 to 2010 is revealed by these two maps.

　　In 2007, the city hospital was surrounded by Ring Road. On the south side, there was Hospital Road linking Ring Road and City Road. On both the easter and the western sides of the Hospital Road, there were six bus stops. On the east side of this road there was a car park open to both the staff of the hospital and the public. The entrance of this car park was further north, by Ring Road.

　　Three years later, on the south side of the hospital that was still surrounded by Ring Road, a roundabout was built. Additionally, another roundabout was constructed a little further south at the intersection of City Road and Hospital Road. A bus station could be found to the west of Hospital Road, and it could access both roundabouts. The old car park was only open for the staff, and cars of the public should be parked in the new parking lot located to the east of the hospital (by Ring Road).

　　To sum up, the traffic conditions in this area became more complex, while at the same time became more effective.

　　这两幅地图展示了在2007年到2010年通往城市医院的道路的变化情况。

　　在2007年，城市医院被环路围绕着。在其南侧，一条叫作医院路的道路连接着环路和城市路。在医院路的东西两侧，有六个公交站。在医院路的东面，有一个对公众和医院员工都开放的停车场。该停车场的入口在更北边的位置，临近环路。

　　三年后，仍然被环路围绕着的医院的南侧新建了一个交通环岛。此外，再往南至城市路和医院路的交会处，另一个交通环岛被建于此。在医院路西有一个公交站，这个公交站连接着两个环岛。旧的停车场只对医院员工开放，公众的车辆则必须停在新建的位于医院东边紧邻主路的停车场里。

　　总之，这一区域的交通状况变得更为复杂，但同时也变得更加高效。

　　名师点评

　　本文将全文分为四段。首段改写题目。主一段描述2007年的情況。主二段介绍2010年的情况。结尾段总括全文。这种写作逻辑非常简单直白，也浅显易懂。

　　值得考生注意的是，文中两幅图的写作顺序都是由北向南，这并非定式，而是根据地图上信息的分布情而定的。此外，表达位置的介词如on、in、to、by等也需要准确使用。