2020年10月24日雅思G类小作文考题分析-书里有错

　　2020年10月24日雅思G类小作文考题分析-书里有错！本文为大家分享雅思G类小作文范文，据热心G友反馈，2020年10月24日雅思大陆考区G类小作文笔试考题为：

　　You have just read book which contains some incorrect information. Write a letter to the author，in your letter:

　　-what is the incorrect information

　　-where is it

　　-why it is important to correct this information

　　审题：正式信，用词要书面化，不可以有缩写。想一本自己熟悉的书，比如专业书里有数据错误，旅游书里有地址错误，之类。第三问“纠错的重要性”可以从为读者负责、维护作者声誉等角度回应。欢迎分享更多ideas！

　　范文：以下范文题目与本题高度相似，范文可借鉴。

　　今天这篇G类9分小作文来自剑14Test2。题目、全文、分析如下。

　　You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.

　　Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. Inyour letter

　　-correct the information in the article

　　-explain why it is important for the magazine togive correct information

　　-suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

　　Dear sir ormadam,

　　The latest edition of your travel magazine included an article about Cambridge, but this contained incorrect information. The writer described the University of Cambridge as being the oldest in the world whereas in fact the oldest university in the English-speaking world is in Oxford. The University of Cambridge was founded in 1209, but Oxford was known to have existed in 1096.

　　A magazine such as yours has an international reputation and is extremely influential with travel companies and individuals alike. It is essential that any information published should be accurate and reliable and I was genuinely surprised that the facts had not been checked prior to publication.

　　I feel that the least the magazine can do is to publish a correction and an apology in next month’s magazine. I would also urge you to ensure that all factual information is thoroughly checked before publication.

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Alan Watson

　　（152 words）

　　结构：每段回答一问。使用了but，whereas，and ，also等连接性词汇让ideas之间的联系更紧密，表意更清晰。

　　扣题：每段2-3个长句对3个写作要求分别进行了拓展。

　　词汇：杂志相关—the latest edition, writer, an international reputation, is extremely influential, publish, accurate and reliable,  publication. 同义替换— prior to = before，facts = factual information.

　　语法：一般过去时、现在完成时、过去完成时等多种时态，被动语态，should、would、can等情态动词，it从句，that引导宾语从句等。

　　学习建议：对于自己不熟悉的话题，可以进行范文中英互译，加深对词汇、句子结构的理解和掌握。

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