雅思G类大作文：公共图书馆类话题范文分享！

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　　Undoubtedly, public libraries are a crucial source of information and education for many people. While some people say they (虽然these和they都是代词，但还是有区别，these是形容词性质，恰当到用法是these libraries，they则可以直接指代名词) are necessary as they provide free access to (不需要特指) books, others opine that they are insignificant since not many people very few individuals use them in the contemporary world. I agree with the former view. (这道题的写作任务是“你的观点”，而不是DG类，所以直接写个人观点即可，无需提及他人观点)

　　开头段建议写法：Undoubtedly, public libraries are a crucial source of information and education for many people. They are indispensable for modern society as they not only offer books to their members at a reasonable cost but also act as repository of rare books that are out of circulation. (直接给出个人观点和原因)

　　大意：公共图书馆对很多人来说是重要的信息和教育资源。它们在现代社会是不可取代的因为它们不只让读者可以以合理的成本读到书，还是退出市场流通的珍稀书籍的储藏地。

　　Public libraries have a plethora of expensive books that are available for people (members/ readers，尽量用话题相关词替换people，提升LR表现) to rent at minimal rents Those who cannot afford to buy them prefer to borrow them from the library for educational purposes. It also benefits (It also radically transforms the life of ……) destitute students who cannot afford to study in schools and universities. For instance, according to a 2018 survey conducted in Japan, around three thousand economically poor people managed to secure decent jobs, (标点错误) by using the knowledge they (时态错误) had gained from reading books at public libraries, in the year 2018. (语法错误)

　　例子的建议写法：According to a 2018 survey conducted in Japan, around three thousand economically poor people gained professional knowledge of civil, mechanical, and computer engineering for free from the country’s central library to secure well-paid jobs in companies such as Softbank, Suzuki, and Toyota.(改写后更具体)

　　Moreover, public libraries act as a warehouse of a wide variety of books that are not readily (副词应放在动词或形容词前面) available in the market . They preserve and store numerous original copies of ancient books (用词不当且冗余) , which help to understand the culture (书的文化?这个观点很奇怪.) and evolution of books over time (书的演化?还是人类文明的演化?). For instance, traditionally, books were handwritten using organic colours that were extracted from plants. Similarly, many authors used tree leaves as papers to write their stories. (例子与前文观点不匹配) All these forms of books are carefully preserved in public libraries. Thus, closing them will eventually result in the loss of these precious books. (写作任务是“一些人认为图书馆不重要”，而不是“应关闭”)

　　例子的建议写法： For instance, the Nehru Library in New Delhi has carefully preserved the original copies of Ramayana, Mahabharata, and Guru Granth which were written on leaves of different plants using organic, plant-based colors. These documents offer unbiased insight into the history and culture of India. No other institution has the human, financial and scientific resources to prevent the decay of these precious books.(更具体、更扣题。可以用自己熟悉的同类概念替换灰色部分，例如中国某些经典是写在竹简和丝绸上)

　　To recapitulate, I believe that public libraries play a crucial part for in the development of society as they not only provide free access of books to the needy, but also act acts as a repository of various conventional books. (注意主语的位置，注意复杂句的准确度)