2020年9月13日雅思(机考)G类小作文考题分析-天气导致租房损坏,本文送上范文,各位雅思考生可以参考一下,更多雅思写作备考,请持续关注环球教育,小编会在第一时间为大家更新,帮助大家更好的学习和备考雅思!
雅思G类小作文考题(北京机考)为:
Your rental accommodation was recently damaged due to bad weather. Write a letter to the landlord and say:
– explain what caused the damage
– why do you need them to fix the problem right away
– what needs to be done to fix it
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审题:半正式信,不能用缩写。主题是“坏天气导致房屋损坏”,可以写暴风雨对门窗的影响,导致漏水、出行不便等。需要使用过去时、现在时、将来时等多种时态。需要恰当使用表达要求的语言。
范文:165 words,未评分,供参考。
Dear Mrs.Smith,
I am your tenant at No.3113 South Valley Street and I am writing to inform you about the serious damage to your house caused by the thunderstorm yesterday.
Last night, the heavy rains and strong wind broke several windows in the bedroom on second floor, leaving glasses scattered everywhere. Besides, the broken tree branches not only damaged the fences in the backyard but also wrecked the main entrance door which is twisted and I cannot go out now.
Due to the awkward situation, I need immediate repair and maintenance. It is cold and unsafe to sleep in a room without windows. Moreover, I will miss an important meeting if the door cannot be fixed before tomorrow morning.
Due to the awkward situation, I request you to kindly arrange a carpenter for repairing the window and the door at your earliest convenience. I can deal with the broken glass myself.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely.