8.16 大陆雅思大作文7分范文及解析:把国际新闻引入课程是否浪费时间 这篇写作你是如何写的呢?本文为大家带来高分范文及写作思路分析,希望能帮到大家!双边类大作文,教育类话题
Some people think that secondary school students should study international news as a school subject, but others argue that it would be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
题目来源:2020年8月16日大陆雅思大作文
题目大意
有人说中学应该把国际新闻引入课程,有人说这是浪费时间。双边讨论并给出你的观点。
写作思路解析
➡️双边讨论类的题目,可以自由讨论双方各自的利弊,我的观点可以是中立或单边支持
➡️我持中立立场——两个观点都可以成立,但是必须在特定的前提之下
➡️甲方:国际新闻要如果要成为中学必修课程,前提是只能针对有志报考社科类专业的学生可行
➡️乙方:国际新闻浪费时间的说法如果要成立,前提就是有些学生的兴趣不在此,所以白学,还有就是有学生已经课业压力很大,无暇学习
提纲梳理见下
高分写作示范
While international news is supposed to be a compulsive course in middle school, others see it as nothing more than a waste of time. I would say both views could be deemed justified, depending on discrete needs of individual students.
To know what’s happening on the planet does have its relevance to students who expect to enroll in social sciences or related majors in college. These majors require applicants to have a wide breadth of knowledge beside basic academic skills, whether it be cultures, economic status, politics or religion in different nations. In response to this, the study of news in different countries seems to be a fairly effective way for students to obtain information of these realms simultaneously. For example, by analyzing the new decisions of China and the US about the ongoing trade war, learners can establish an in-depth understanding of the socioeconomic status of both sides.
However, what seems attractive and fascinating to some can be totally repulsive to others – there do exist students who consider the learning of international news as time-wasting. The interest in social science is not universally applicable to every teenager; it would be absurd to oblige one to study what might be irrelevant to his or her future career – how can we force a student who opts for engineering to spend time on studying the current war in middle east? Also, let’s not be oblivious to the study pressure on some middle school students. To add an extra class on curriculum may exacerbate the heavy school load for some students who have already been inundated with other compulsory courses.
It is my conclusion therefore, whether to incorporate international news to middle school curriculum is not an either-or issue; it should vary by the conditions of individual students.
相关词汇和语法结构
A wide breadth of knowledge 广泛的知识面
Socioeconomic 社会经济的
Simultaneously 同时地
Repulsive 反感的
Curriculum 课程
Exacerbate 使更加剧
Be inundated with 忙于应付
Compulsory courses 必修课
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