8.15大陆雅思大作文7分范文：犯罪是本性

　　8.15大陆雅思大作文7分范文：犯罪是本性，高分写作都是怎样的呢？运用了哪些语句和词汇呢？本文就跟随上名校小编一起来学习一下吧，希望这些内容对于各位同学能够有所帮助！更多雅思高分内容，请持续关注环球教育！

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　　Many have questioned whether it is possible to determine a link between genetics and criminal behavior.  In my opinion, despite strong resistance in many quarters, crime occurs and is partially fostered by biological traits and still actions can be taken to intervene before antisocial behavior escalates into crime.

　　There is now little scientific doubt that genetics play a part in the development of traits that have the potential to lead an individual down the path of illegal behavior.    Many genes may affect brain functioning in ways that either increases or reduce the chances individuals learning various complex behavior patterns.  Specifically, some genes influence difficult temperament, impulsivity, novelty seeking, and lack of empathy, which predispose people to be exposed to environmental risks and make it hard for people to express emotions in what would be considered a positive manner, leading people to engage in anti-social behaviors like enjoy getting lost or doing something crazy just for fun.  Also a lack of positive developmental traits is proven directly connected with antisocial behaviors.  When individuals drift from adolescence onto adulthood, symptoms of aggression, property destruction, deceitfulness, and rule violation may be exhibited in the workplace and home.

　　Such as it is, social skills and environment is a doorway to unlocking genetic traits that are instilled in people.  Therefore, approaches intervening early in children’s life such as preventing them from abuse, domestic violence and exposure to emotional harm may well be effectively adopted.  As physical punishments of slapping, hitting and punching provide a pattern to be modeled when youngsters are themselves frustrated and disenchanted, parental disciplinary tactics could be suggested or emphasized.  Besides, providing instructions and guidance on anger management and emotion language or reinforcing helpful behavior both at school and home will definitely diminish the likelihood of embarking on or persisting in a criminal career.

　　In fact, it is a combination of both biological factors in addition to social environment that molds people into who they are.  Although genes dictate the mindset of one that chooses to engage in criminal behavior, certain temperament interacting with a myriad of experience, acquired interpersonal competencies, academic skills and effective strategies will avoid the pattern of such behavior.

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　　antisocial behavior

　　escalate

　　temperament

　　impulsivity

　　deceitfulness

　　disenchanted

　　reinforce

　　embark