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7.23雅思大作文7分范文及解析:带有暴力内容的电影和游戏流行

2020-07-24 14:40:27编辑:景景

  7.23雅思大作文7分范文及解析:带有暴力内容的电影和游戏流行   本文为大家带来​双边类大作文,媒体类话题 题目如下:

  Films and games containing violence are popular today. Some people say they have a negative effect on society and should be banned. others say they are harmless relaxation. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

  题目来源:2020年7月23日大陆雅思大作文

  题目大意

  带有暴力内容的电影和游戏流行。有人说对社会有害需要禁止,有人说这无害的娱乐。双边讨论并给出你的观点。

  写作思路解析

  双边讨论类的题目,可以自由讨论双方各自的利弊,我的观点可以是中立或单边支持。

  我持中立立场——两个观点都有不合理的地方

  甲方:a negative effect on society表达过于笼统——society是个抽象概念,影视暴力可能在某个领域有负面影响,而在对其他领域则不是(甚至还有好处);

  乙方:they are harmless relaxation 同样也是过于笼统——影视暴力对于有判断力的成年人确实无害,而对于心智不成熟的青少年而言,就有危害,因而需要有管制措施如影视分级,禁止未成年人单独接触暴力作品;

  提纲

  高分写作示范

  Today, many films and games are inundated with violent content. Some people regard them as detrimental to society and should be banned, whereas others see them as nothing more than a leisure activity. I would say neither opinion is logical enough to depict the entire picture – it is simplistic to jump to either conclusion without considering the context.

  It is a generalization, from my perspective, to associate media violence to a blight on society and call for a ban. The so-called “a negative effect on society” is an ambiguous claim – society is an abstract term that can to be viewed from different dimensions. Some might point to the apprehension that a long exposure to media violence desensitizes users; nevertheless, this is not the case when considered from a business perspective – such games and films have spawned multiple industries, whether these be blockbusters to international tournaments of video games, not to mention the job opportunities created by these businesses. At this point, I don’t think it would necessarily benefit the society should these media products be banned.

  By the same token, it is also an oversimplification to equate media violence with pure leisure and leave them unchecked. It makes sense for adult audience occupying the discernment to see violent in films as harmless relaxation. Unfortunately, this opinion is not applicable to young minds who are susceptible to media and may act out scenarios presented on screen. In this respect, the ramification of media violence is something beyond pure leisure and requires administrative intervention, such as rating systems that prohibit minors from watching films relevant to violence without the accompany of parents.

  It is my conclusion therefore, to venerate either opinion over the other is illogical – how to deal with media violence is conundrum that needs to take into account the different contexts where the topic is in discussion.

  相关词汇和语法结构

  Be inundated with  充满

  Ambiguous   模糊的

  Spawn  孕育

  Blockbuster  大片

  Tournament  比赛

  Discernment  辨别力

  Susceptible  易受影响的

  Act out  发泄或行为不当

  Ramification  后果

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