雅思备考：雅思G类大作文范文分析-失业补助

　　雅思写作如何高效备考，2020年上半年其他考区出现的一道G类大作文题目是“政府发放失业补助对影响&是好是坏”。本文就和上名校小编一起来看看范文以及范文解析吧，希望对于你的雅思备考能够有所参考！

　　学习方法：认真审题，对照中文译文写出英文段落，然后与原文进行对比，看句式、用词上存在哪些错误、原文的句型和词汇是否更准确丰富，做笔记，再次阅读原文。

　　良药苦口：很多考生长期吐槽不知道怎么写大作文。如果有认真结合范文看解析，不可能学不会。有大把时间焦虑，不如用来充分理解、消化、吸收一篇干货教学帖，必有收获。

　　In some countries, governments provide payments for unemployed people.

　　How does this impact people?

　　Is this a positive or negative development?

　　范文：298 words，粗体为固定表达，下划线为话题词汇。

　　In many nations, the government gives unemployment benefits to its citizens in need. This allows people to make ends meet during difficult times and is largely a positive development.

　　译文：在很多国家，政府为有需要对公民提供失业补助。这让人们在困难时期能够收支平衡，是件好事。

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　　解析：积累同义替换，some countries = many nations, payments = benefits, people = citizens. 这道题是2-part题型，构思压力最小，观点句只要直接回应两个写作任务即可，上述段落观点句先用This allows people to...回应了impact，然后用is largely a positive development同时回应了第二问。有些考生可能纠结于“第二问要不要好坏都说”，其实完全没必要，认为好就说好，认为坏就说坏，这样观点清晰、论述压力小。需要好坏都说的写作任务是“Discuss advantages and disadvantages”。

　　The effect of unemployment payment is that struggling individuals and families are able tosurvive challenging periods. A good recent example of this would be the record unemployment rates in the wake of the 2020 Covid-19 pandemic. In the United States alone, millions of workers lost their jobs. Many families live paycheck to paycheck and withoutgovernment support they might lose their homes or struggle to put food on the table every day. Government money allowed them to persevere in a difficult period and use their time to look for a new job. Depending on the conditions of the payments, they can try to find a quality job rather than settling for the first position offered by a company trying to exploit the leverage of an historic jobless rate.

　　译文：失业补助可以让处于困境的个人和家庭度过艰难的时期。一个很好的近期的例子是新冠疫情带来的破纪录的失业率。仅在美国就有数百万工人失业。许多家庭以薪水为生，没有政府支持的话他们可能会失去住所或吃不上饭。政府的资助能使他们坚持渡过困难时期并有时间找新工作。根据补助条款，他们可以努力去找可心的工作而不是凑合做一份想要利用失业率的公司提供的职位。（利用人们急需工作的心态，可能薪水会不高之类）

　　解析：回应第一个写作任务。中心句预告全段；第二句和第三句举例解释中心句提出的“challenging periods”；第四句和第五句说明政府补助如何帮助个人和家庭度过难关（不至于没吃没住）；第六句补充说明政府补助对失业人员的支持（进一步解释写作任务how impact)。文中使用了多种同义表达替换“政府补助”，应背记。

　　This is largely a positive development because it has wide-reaching effects in society. Society benefits from lifting its most vulnerable citizens out of poverty. Without aid some individuals may turn to illegitimate means of supporting themselves. It is unlikely most would become criminals, but the greater effect would be economic. The unemployed cannot buy products and stimulate the consumer economy. The money the government hands out allows them to keep buying food, going shopping, and props up both large and small businesses. A good economy in turn increases the chances that businesses will begin hiring again and unemployment will decline.

　　译文：这很大程度是个积极趋势因为它对社会影响广泛。帮助最困难的群体脱困对全社会都有好处。没有资助的话，有些人可能会用非法手段谋生。虽然大多数人不会犯罪，但会对经济产生很大影响。失业者无法购买产品并刺激消费。政府发的钱可以用来买食品、购物和支撑企业。良好的经济反过来会促使企业增加用工数量并减少失业。

　　解析：回应第二个写作任务。中心句给出个人观点及原因，接下来用解释、反向思考等方式从经济发展的角度论述了政府为失业人员提供补助如何让整个社会受益。

　　In conclusion, unemployment payments are a great boon for those without jobs and benefit the whole of society as well. It is important that unemployment agencies are well-run and strictly regulated to ensure continuance of the crucial social service they provide.

　　译文：总之，失业救济金对于没有工作的人来说是一个巨大的福音，也使整个社会受益。重要的是失业机构应得到严格的监管并合理运营，以确保这一重要社会服务的持续性。

　　解析：重申个人观点，略延伸。