雅思大作文7分范文及解析：父母和教师谁对孩子影响更大
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For school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
题目来源：2015年11月7日亚太雅思大作文
题目大意
父母和老师谁对孩子的影响更大，是否同意?
写作思路解析
规划写作任务，论证过程分两大方面：
1. 教师对孩子的影响：
a.教授学术知识和智力开发(优势：老师具有专业性)
b. 社交方面的发展 (优势：在校有和人交流的环境)
2. 家长对孩子的影响：大优势：家长对孩子的影响是最先最早的。
a. 孩子会模仿家长的言行
b. 家庭教育的作用
关键词
intelligence development：智力发展的影响。
social development：社交能力的发展。
提纲梳理见下
高分写作示范
The relative importance of teachers and parents is a frequent topic of discussion when it comes to children’s intelligent and social development. Though I agree the influence of teachers is very strong, parents are often regarded as one of the strongest predictors of their young charges.
On one hand, being more immersed in learning atmosphere, and more confident in their knowledge of the pedagogy and subject matter and understanding of diversity, teachers do contribute great deal to children’s intelligence and social success. As the key person and practicer of the course, teachers can effectively help students to acquire general knowledge and to inspire the development of cognitive and psychomotor ability. Meanwhile, students will be coached to make sense of and provide emotional reactions or be grouped to exercise communication and cooperation skills.
On the other hand, research proves that children’s foundational understanding of intelligence and emotion is formed before they even start explicitly learning a curriculum. It is the environment created by the parents that could stunt or facilitate a child’s sensory, motor, emotional, and linguistic development. This is not only because children are prone to model everything a parent dose and incorporate what they see into their own lives. More importantly, the home education system adopted by the parents and the level of support given to their children will directly affect their children’s intelligence development and problem-solving ability. Children，for example, who are constantly showered with encouragement form their parents tend to grow up with self-esteem and enjoy more popularity among peers.
In conclusion, although it is true that intelligence can be gained through proper education, parents have much more of a role to play in their children’s understanding and outlook on intelligence and social skills.
相关词汇和语法结构
the relative importance 相对来说更重要
a frequent topic of discussion 广受争议的话题
young charges 孩子
immerse in 沉浸在
pedagogy 教学方法
general knowledge 常识
cognitive and psychomotor ability 认知和心理能力
emotional reaction 情感回应
explicitly 清晰的
incorporate 吸收
stunt 阻碍
facilitate 促进
prone to 易于
self-esteem 自尊
