雅思考试万年5.5，到底是什么原因？到7分要多久？

　　世界上最痛苦的事是听力阅读过了，口语写作没过，世界上最最痛苦的事是听力阅读口语都过了，写作依然没过……虽然大家都比较关注口语，但实际上写作平均分就和口语差不太多。雅思考试好不容易总分够了，一看写作5.5分，考试费又双叒叕白给了，不郁闷是不可能的。

　　其实相比起口语的真人对话，写作这种埋头写写写的考试方式更容易让烤鸭们感到舒适——毕竟英语写作我们不仅从小就考，而且方式也差不多。

　　然而从小训练也敌不过雅思的魔鬼评分标准，烤鸭们纷纷化身万年5.5选手，为了考出一个理想的分数，被雅思掏空了钱包。

　　归根到底，还是因为面对真人考官，多多少少还会收敛一点，装作没有背过范文；而一到埋头写作环节，加上时间紧张，各种各样的模板就全都出来了。比如考到城市化，一个考场30个人，可能29个人的高分词汇都有且仅有civilization……

　　也难怪社会类和环境类话题最受烤鸭欢迎，毕竟几乎所有模板都能无脑套，一落笔就知道老政治家了。

　　问题是，被滥用的高分模板，还是高分模板吗？（当然高分语料和句型还是要掌握的！不要走极端掉进另一个误区哈！）

　　不少烤鸭心里也苦，考试只有60分钟，小作文20分钟大作文40分钟，几乎没有认真思考的时间，很多同学都是看到题目大致区分一下话题，就不动脑子开始默写模板了。所以合格的7分范文到底应该是怎样的？来听听大佬的说法！

　　请记住：

　　没有任何神奇的单词、短语或句子

　　可以原地提升你的写作水平

　　让你从5.5直升6.5

　　如果有，那一定是在骗人！

　　首先，7分水平的文章应该是地道和老练的。

　　下图是雅思公布的Task 2评分标准，关于7分的描述非常清楚，只要照做，就可以拿到7分。我们可以看到评分分为4项，分别是Task Response (在Task 1中叫Task Achievement)，Coherence & Cohesion, Lexical Resources和Grammatical Range & Accuracy. 7分意味着四个评分项都要拿到7分，所以想考到7分的同学，只需要重点看7分对应的四项叙述。

　　其次，想要拿到7分，可以使用模板，但是不要滥用模板！

　　你需要知道文章的结构，但这不代表要背诵大量段落，一字不改的句子，如果在你的文章里有大量这种模板，那不可能拿到7分。在Task 2中使用例子，真实发生的事来支撑你的论点，好过使用大量模棱两可冠冕堂皇的讲道理。请记住，细节是让你的文章更上一层楼的关键。

　　一个7分的主体段结构又是怎样的呢？建议大家分四部分。第一句是主题句，接下来是一个句子给出原因，再写2-5句给出细节支撑，最后写1到2句话总结这个段落。

　　来看一个例子：

　　Immunising children is an important tool to improve public health. Since it was mandatory for many decades, it has helped to eradicate diseases, as there were no hosts available for them to develop. This way, smallpox does not exist anymore, and poliomyelitis is bound to follow. Looking at common childhood diseases, they may seem harmless and parents may think that it is not necessary to vaccinate their children against them. This is wrong though, as these diseases can have severe complications; measles, for example, can cause encephalitis, with severe consequences for the child. Vaccines have helped drastically to improve communal health overall by reducing the number of patients of such diseases. In short, to reduce the possibility of contracting a disease or even eradicating it, parents should be obliged to vaccinate their children.

　　主题句：Immunising children is an important tool to improve public health.

　　解释原因：Since it was mandatory for many decades, it has helped to eradicate diseases, as there were no hosts available for them to develop.

　　细节支持：This way, smallpox does not exist anymore, and poliomyelitis is bound to follow. Looking at common childhood diseases, they may seem harmless and parents may think that it is not necessary to vaccinate their children against them. This is wrong though, as these diseases can have severe complications; measles, for example, can cause encephalitis, with severe consequences for the child. Vaccines have helped drastically to improve communal health overall by reducing the number of patients of such diseases.

　　最后总结本段：In short, to reduce the possibility of contracting a disease or even eradicating it, parents should be obliged to vaccinate their children.

　　注意，每一段的论点不在多，胜在一个论点也要充分展开解释清楚！

　　最后，烤鸭君想要强调，写作如何上7，网上有各种各样似是而非的“干货”和“套路”，但最终还是要回归官方评分标准本身，大家要擦亮双眼，理智对待网上的信息！

　　另外，多阅读地道的英文材料和高分范文也可以帮助烤鸭积累表达，清楚段落结构，增强逻辑性哦~祝大家都能早日屠鸭上岸！