7月10日雅思写作大作文范文赏析：扫盲VS青少年教育

　　7月10日雅思写作大作文范文赏析：扫盲VS青少年教育  作文题目 Education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　题型类别 教育类

　　题材类别 旧题，原题重现

　　类似旧题 Educating children is expensive and in some countries the government pays some or all of the

　　costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantage s？

　　参考范文 Education systems around the globe are continuing to improve based on current information and research on the matter. Nevertheless, adults who lack basic literacy skills such as reading and writing remain uneducated, which is a major issue. Whether or not allocating greater funding towards educating illiterate adults or young people will be explored.

　　It is universally known that children have the ability to learn knowledge and pick up information much quicker than adults. As a result, most of a country’s educational resources ought to be dedicated to educating youngsters in order to take advantage of this period where the learning curve is not very steep. Moreover, children and teenagers are unable to work unless they reach the age of majority in most nations, which means they belong in schools or educational institutions.

　　On the contrary, there should be educational programs to assist adults who are unable to read or write, nonetheless, it is difficult to state that these courses are more essential than teaching youngsters. Providing classes to adults would enable them to have sufficient skills and abilities to perform basic jobs that are required in society. Furthermore, being literate in this day and age is a necessity that can offer adults the possibility of performing a job that can enable them to sustain themselves and their families while earning a living.

　　All in all, adults form a large percentage of the working population and they must be able to communicate as well as possess basic literacy skills to function well in society. Nevertheless, the priority of a nation should be geared towards educating the young in order to ensure a prosperous future.

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　　范文由环球教育加拿大国籍外教 Khalid Hasmath 老师本人执笔创作，仅供学术交流。