雅思写作范文及解析：新科技改变孩子的娱乐方式的利弊

2021-04-22 11:30:46编辑：素素

　　雅思写作真题范文及解析：新科技改变孩子的娱乐方式的利弊，way for children to spend their free time 是一个抽象的内容，可以细化为不同的具体内容，然后可以推导出不同的利弊，如社交，娱乐对于孩子产生的影响。可以单边论证，也可以双边论证。立场即可以单边也可以中立。

　　利弊分析大作文社会类话题

　　New technologies have changed the way for children to spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

　　（题目来源：2019年2月14日雅思大作文）

　　题目大意

　　新科技改变孩子的娱乐方式。利弊如何？

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　　审题，找出关键词

　　New technologies：新科技（具体是电脑，网络）

　　Children：孩子（限定群体）

　　spend their free time：消遣空闲时间（具体是社交，娱乐；各自的利弊可以关联到人际关系，个性养成，对孩子心理和行为的影响，技能的获得等）

　　高分范文

　　While advacned techonology is revolutionizing the leisure life of younger generaion, I tend to say that we should pay more attention to the dark side of the phenomenon in terms of its detrimental effects on children’s personality development and behavior.

　　Superficially, it cannot be denied that the entertainment and social life of the younger generation have been more diversified thanks to the emerge of new technology as computers and the Internet. For example, living in a world connected by the ubiquitous Internet, today’s children are able to make new friends with peers at any corner of the globe, which is inconceivable to their predecessors who lived in the world without online social media as Facebook or Twitter. Also, another benefit we should not forget is the computer skills children acquainted from playing video games, which has become an indispensable qualification in study and future careers.

　　Beyond these seemingly benefits, is my apprehension about the potential risks of this technical trend. The first problem is that it would isolate young people from the real world. When disappearing down in the rabbit hole behind screens, youngsters are alienated from friends or family members in real life, which might lead to the psychological problems, such as self-centeredness, indifference and inconsideration.

　　Apart from that, another risk we cannot afford to ignore is the obscene content on the Internet, say, violence, erotic pictures and videos, and other disgusting information. Being exposed to these materials, naïve young minds are more likely to be eroded and, more seriously, they are prone to imitate these misbehaviors which may lead to unforeseeable ramifications.

　　Given this, I have to argue that more attention needs to be paid on the negative influence on the next generation inflicted by new technology.

　　相关词汇

　　Revolutionize 革新

　　Detrimental 有害的

　　Superficially 表面地

　　Diversified 多样的

　　Ubiquitous 无所不在的

　　Inconceivable 不可想象的

　　Predecessor 前辈

　　Acquaint 获得

　　Indispensable 不可或缺

　　Apprehension 担心