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雅思写作之如何做到“有话可说”?关键在于构建背景!

2021-04-02 14:19:10编辑:素素

  雅思写作之如何做到“有话可说”?很多同学们表示,作文的文章段落拓展是一个非常大的考验,很多时候都是在翻来覆去地说,“车轱辘话来回滚”自己越写越迷糊。

  那我们如何才能变得像“奇葩说”的选手一样,做到“泰山崩于前,而面不改色”,修炼到不管怎样都能坚定立场,有话可说?

  关键点就在于构建背景,构建背景,构建背景。重要的事情说三遍。

  任何的说话有说服力的人,必须先构架背景,才会让自己的演讲有说服力,并且最重要的一点是有话可说。

  来,我们拿出一个topic sentence 举例子。

  比如我们谈论到一个话题——学生是否对现在的政治更加感兴趣了。

雅思写作之如何做到“有话可说”?关键在于构建背景!
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  我们选现在学生对政治更加感兴趣了,因为国家间的政策对国际学生群体有很大的影响。如法炮制,首先我们要论证的话,要先说背景。(对于这个论点来说也就是当前的形势是什么)

  首先,国家间的政策对国际学生群体有很大的影响。对于往来于中美之间的人,特别是在美留学的学生来说,中美关系是好是坏对他们影响最直接。

  例如,2020年冠状病毒爆发后,美国改变了对中国的态度,出台了一系列限制中国学生的措施,包括很多学生面临遣返,很多学生申请留学签证困难等等。(说背景的时候,如果想到了例子,当前发生的事情,也会套用一些例子)

  在这种情况下,国际学生群体,包括他们的家庭,每天都要关注政治新闻,以获得足够的信息来决定未来是否改变他们的学习计划。(紧接着就能围绕自己的主题句进行疯狂输出)

  因此,政策的变化是国际学生群体非常关注的问题。(最后进行一个小小的总结)

  这里老师把原创的前两段内容展示出来,大家读一读。

  Politics is playing an increasingly important role in many people's lives and is influencing people's lives. Communication between countries led to some great changes in society as a whole. These changes affect everyone's life either indirectly or directly. I think students are becoming more and more interested in politics now as the world is changing so rapidly.(中心论点)

  First of all, the policies between countries have a great influence on the international student community.(主题句) For those who travel between China and the United States, especially students studying in the United States, whether relations between China and the United States deteriorate or improve has the most immediate impact for them.

  For example, In 2020, after the outbreak of the corona virus, the United States changed its attitude towards China, and issued a series of measures to restrict Chinese students, including many students facing repatriation, many students facing difficulties to apply for a visa to study abroad, and so on. (背景信息)

  The community of international students, including their families, has to follow the political news every day in this situation to get enough information to decide whether to change their study plan in the future. (回头点题)Therefore, policy changes are of great concern to the international student community.(小的总结)

  今天的分享到这里就结束啦~学习方法很重要,但是勤加练习更重要,希望大家能够早日拿到满意的分数!