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While there is an opinion that tomorrow is the most important thing in life, I tend to disagree with this claim – it is simplistic to venerate future problems over the ones facing us today if we cannot clarify the difference between the two ambiguous terms.
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Indeed, it is not difficult to for some people to assume that future deserves higher priority over current issues. From this perspective, many conundrums frustrating individuals and governments should be addressed from a long-term perspective; the solutions would be holistic should the potential ramifications be taken into consideration. Problems regarding this statement consists of personal career prospects, the balance between economic development and the environment, or the relationship between countries – any schemes would be deemed interim or even short-sighted if it only focused on current plights.
The problem with aforementioned reasoning, in my opinion, is the misinformation of the interpretation of today and tomorrow. It looks to me that there doesn’t exist a precise dividing point between so-called ‘the present’ and ‘future’; rather, the difference should be understood as a continuum not a binary opposition – any plans in relations to personal or national problems should be placed at one point along this continuum rather than in one of two boxes. Another argument against the utterance in the topic it its oblivion to the uncertainty of future, which makes many long-term schemes unsustainable due to unforeseeable changes in the future. One notorious example can be seen in the failure of socialism revolution in previous Soviet Union, with its strategies focusing more on abstract future while ignoring many substantial problems at the moment.
It is my conclusion therefore, it is oversimplified to place primary emphasis on future as opposed to current issues without scrutinizing the context where the discussion take place.
相关词汇和语法结构
Conundrum 难题
Holistic 全面的
Scheme 计划
Interim 短期的
Plight 困境
Continuum 连续体,演变的事物
Oblivion 遗忘
Unsustainable 不可持续的