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雅思写作成绩不如预期?雅思写作黄金自检十原则帮你查错!

2020-07-16 15:03:26编辑:景景

  很多考生在考雅思后,预估自己的写作会上6,结果只有5.5分,怎么回事呢?小编要来为大家更新雅思写作黄金自检十原则,帮助大家在写作的时候少出错!写作进步的过程也就是不断改错的过程,错误越少,分数就越高。写完作文后第一步就是仔细检查看有没有错误,找到错误并且改正,就是把一个丢分点变成个得分点。

  下面列出雅思写作自检的十条黄金原则,古人十年磨一剑,我们以这十条原则作明镜,相信经过十篇短文的练习,你的写作6分应该是十拿九稳!

  一、拼写、标点要正确

  尽量避免拼写和标点错误,虽然笔误一般不会影响文章的理解,但拼写、标点错误过多也是会扣分的。所以,最保险的办法就是杜绝一切小错!

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  例1

  Therefore, at the present time, the world population is more than doubled and the growth rate shows no sign of slowing down, as a result, the domestic and industrial use of fresh water has been shooting up dramatically. Furthermore, the overuse of water resources constitudes a major cause of this situation.

  【解析】:

  逗号使用有误;单词“ constitutes”拼错;

  “ double”的用法如下修改更为地道:

  改正如下:

  Therefore, at the present time, the world population has doubled during the past decade and the growth rate shows no sign of slowing down. As a result, the domestic and industrial use of fresh water has been shooting up dramatically. Furthermore, the over use of water resources constitutes a major cause of this situation.

  【译】:

  因此,目前世界人ロ在过去的十年里已经翻了一番并且没有丝毫下降的迹象。所以,家庭用水和工业用水量都急剧攀升。另外,对水资源的过度使用也是造成目前现象的主要原因。

  二、使用了正确的语法结构,关键检查下列几个方面:

  ①动词时态一致

  ②主谓一致:主要注意单数第三人称。

  ③词性(尤其是名词、动词、形容词):中国学生最常犯的错误就是弄混词性必须注意的是:动词不能作主语,而要把它换成动名词形式( doing);形容词和副词容易混用,一句话总结:形容词修饰名词;而副词修饰动词、形容词和副词。

  ④名词单复数:注意可数名词和不可数名词。

  ⑤用词准确:注意英语和汉语两种语言的不同,想当然地去用单词,尤其是动词往往会出错,最简单的方法:查字典看例句怎么用,把意思吃透。

  ⑥冠词错误和介词错误:比较灵活,有些是固定用法,注意平时积累。

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  例1

  In this day and age, almost every person live in an enlightened society with ahigh living standard. But in the meantime,increasingly people are concerning about the shortage of fresh water. Thus, the essence of this essay is to analyse some possible causes and then followed by some reasonable solutions

  【解析】:

  该句语法错误较多:

  ①单三用“live";

  ②副词increasingly”不能修饰名词" people

  ③" concering”为介词,相当于about,表示“关于”的意思;

  ④从语法上看“then”后面的" followed”应该是和" analyse"”并列构成动词不定式的,那么“ to followed”"就错啦!动词不定式永远是“to+do(动词原形)”。

  改正如下:

  In this day and age, almost every person lives in an enlightened society with a high living standard. But in the meantime, an increasing number of people are concerned about the shortage of fresh water. Thus, the essence of this essay is to analyse some possible causes and then present some reasonable solutions

  【译】:

  现如今,几乎人人都生活在一个生活水平较高的文明社会。但是,与此同时,越来越多的人担忧淡水短缺同题。

  所以,本篇文章的主旨是分析淡水短缺的可能的原因并给出相应的合理的解决办法。

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