雅思写作中的主从复合句要如何写好?想要提高雅思写作分数,首先学生要把句子主要成分写好,下面和小编一起来看看主从复合句的解析(更多雅思写作语法知识课程咨询可在线联系客服老师哦):
例1 Schools, being perceived as important educational institutions, should acknowledge that a wide range of courses whichincludes both academic and non-academic units is necessary for students' development. (误)
【解析】:
当句子比较长时,先写好主要成分,也就是主系表或主谓宾。本句是主谓宾结构。
主语为“ schools,谓语动词为 should acknowledge”
任何语言的核心是动词,可以毫不夸张地说,掌握了动词就掌握了一门语言。尤其是当句子较长时,一定要清楚地用好谓语动词,谓语用对了,句子也就八九不离十了!“that"”引导的是宾语从句。
"being perceived as important educational institutions”为现在分词短语作状语,对句子主干没有任何影响。可以暂时忽略!整体上把握好之后再看一些细节!上面的句子在宾语从句部分有错误:
①在“that”引导的宾语从句中,主语是a wide range of courses”,”which includes both academic and non-academic units”是定语从句,修饰先行词" a wide range of courses",不是句子主干,可暂时忽略!
所以宾语从句中,主干结构为:主系表,即:"a wide range of courses is necessary for students' development.”这就是去掉了定语从句后刺下的成分。错误非常明显,主语 a wide range of courses"为复数而系动词为单数"is",这就导致主谓不一致这样一个很浅显的错误!长句分析其实很简单,那就是去掉长句的修饰部分,看主干部分,这样把复杂的长句変成简单句,错误就一目了然了。
②注意这个重点:当关系代词在定语从句中作主语时,它要和前面的关系代词在人称和数上保持一致!这里被定语从句所惨的先行词为“ a wide range of courses”,是复数,那么定语从句的谓语动词" includes”就必须改为和复数主语搭配”include”
句子改正为:
Schools, being perceived as important educational institutions, should acknowledge that a wide range of courses which includeboth academic and non-academic units are necessary for students' development.
【译】:
学校被看作是重要的教育机构,所以必须认识到除学术课程外,其他非学术性的多样课程对学生的成长也是非常必要的。