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雅思大作文《发出噪音的人或物》写作主旨如何升华?

2020-07-13 10:43:17编辑:小羊

  雅思大作文《发出噪音的人或物》写作主旨如何升华?前面我们讲了前三步的写作思路,接下来是最后一步升华主题,下面和小编一起看看:

  04 How you felt about it

  现在到了升华主旨的时候了,我相信很多同学会开始骂骂咧咧,觉得噪音的存在打扰到了自己的生活。可是,这样的回答真的有点缺少人情味。想问我们是否可以从负面的东西里寻找一些共情力。

雅思大作文《发出噪音的人或物》写作主旨如何升华?
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  案例一讲的是宝宝晚上哭闹的故事。虽然这样的哭闹很烦人,但是你是否有想过你也是从这样的哭闹过来的,所以要学会理解。

  Example :

  To be honest, when I first heard his crying, I was very annoyed and grumpy 脾气坏的. But my mum told me I should be more considerate and patient. She told me when I was a baby, I cried a lot as well and even more frequently than him and the neighbors never complained. She told me that taking care of a new baby is no easy task and that I would see for myself one day.

  案例二讲的是夫妻吵架的故事。虽然他们的吵闹持续了很久产生了很多噪音,但你可以从噪音转移到对婚姻的探讨。

  Example :

  I feel sorry for the couple as I think it can't be a healthy relationship if they fight and argue all the time. My mum said that some couples are different and like to have a fiery relationship. I would hate to have that kind of marriage, it would be so stressful. I guess everyone is different.

  案例三讲的是化工厂爆炸的故事。虽然爆炸声很吓人,但你也可以为此感叹生命的短暂以及无常。

  Example :

  The experience really made me think about how precious life can be and how quickly it can all be taken away. Sadly 10 people lost their lives that day. 10 people who woke up and went to work like any other normal day but never made it home. Life is short and you need to cherish every little moment as you never know when it will be your last.