雅思写作《发出噪音的人或物》的框架构思是什么?很多学生拿到题目肯定是比较懵逼的不知道要如何写,前面我们讲了前两步学生的写作步骤,接下来我们一起来看看写作的时间线:
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03 What you did when you heard the noise
这是一道“What”类型的问题,按该题的拆分原则来看,我们可以有两种选择按“主次”或“时间线”拆分。但鉴于此题会有比较强烈的时间线,也就是先做什么,后做什么,所以,我们只需考虑“时间线”即可。
至于你先做什么,后做什么,我们可以这么来思考:
① 你可以无所作为
无所作为,并非指真的什么都不做,只是你可能只是单纯的想方法去减少噪音对你的影响。比如:关上门窗、大声放音乐、看电视剧等。
Example:
I decided to put some music on but unfortunately, that didn't work. Then I tried putting earphones in but I could still hear his high pitched screams 高分贝的尖叫. In the end, I decided to give up on trying to get to sleep and I started to watch a soap opera instead which did take my mind off 不再理会 the wailing 嚎啕大哭.
② 你可以有所作为
有所作为则是指你可能会和产生噪音方产生一定的互动。比如:报警来制止噪音、找对方理论让其减少噪音、去到事发地参与问题的解决。
Example one:
When I first heard them fighting, I didn't do anything. I just tried to drown out the noise with my music 用音乐压过噪音 but as the afternoon went on the fighting intensified 加剧. I really didn't want to get involved but at the same time, I was worried about them. I decided to call the apartment security officer 安保人员 and he went to their apartment to check on them.
Example two:
When I heard the explosion I just froze as I had no idea what it was and I was scared. Then my mum told me what it was, so I rushed down to see if there was anything I could do to help. It was like a scene from a movie. There were people running around in a panic 惊慌地 and a lot of people
had injuries. Luckily there were many ambulances on-site现场 to help.