雅思写作练习:《发出噪音的人或物》如何写呢?《发出噪音的人或物》应该算是本季话题的难点之一,但通过视频的讲解,我相信大家应该有了更多的想法。当然,想法永远只是解题的第一步,重点还是在于接下去的每一个小问题该怎么解答。现在就请大家跟着我的步伐来完成整个话题吧!
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01 Who or what made the noise
鉴于这是一个事件类的话题,在拓展第一小问时,我们可以从时间点的信息来引出全文。至于时间点的拓展在上一篇讲解中也有涉及,我们可以给出“Year-month-date-hour”的具体时间点。之后,我们就可以由此带出你听到了怎样的噪音,比如:孩子的啼哭声、夫妻的打骂声、按喇叭声、鸟叫虫鸣声、狗吠鸡叫声等
接着你可以给出更为细节的描写,包括这个声源是谁带来的以及会产生这个噪音的原因,比如:啼哭声来自领居家五个月大的孩子;吵架声来自于一对年轻的夫妻,他们刚结婚没多久,但经常吵架;叫声是由家后山的乌鸦带来的;猫叫声来自于小区的野猫,每到深夜就会开始狂叫。
Example one:
Last night, at around 11 pm, I had just got tucked into bed 上床睡觉 and was looking forward to going to sleep after an exhausting day when all of a sudden, I heard a baby screaming 尖利刺耳的声音. It was my neighbor's, 5-month-old baby.
Example two:
About a month ago, after having my lunch, I decided to have a cat nap. I had
just drifted off 迷迷糊糊地睡去 when all of a sudden there was a crashing sound碰撞声 coming from upstairs. My neighbors are newlyweds 新婚夫妇 but unfortunately, they fight all the time.
Example three:
It took place a year ago just after I had moved into my new apartment. One day, when I was doing my homework, I suddenly heard a huge bang 突然的巨响. I was terrified as I had no idea what it was. My mum called and explained that there had been an explosion 爆炸 at a nearby chemical factory. Within minutes there werefire engines 消防车 flying passed my house with their sirens 警报声 wailing (汽笛、警报等) 长鸣.