雅思写作常见十大雷区：词性弄错和用词不当

　　众所周知，中国的烤鸭在雅思写作中是表现比较差的，写作的单项成绩在全世界的排名为倒数第四，好一点儿的，能排到倒数第五，主要有两个原因，第一，中国烤鸭语法功底较差，第二，中国烤鸭的汉式思维导致​出错。常见的雅思写作错误有很多，本文为大家整理磁性弄错和用词不当的错误，希望能帮到各位烤鸭！

　　词性弄错和用词不当：教育类话题

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　　错误范例1

　　Besides, some researches have indicated that children living in such a circumstance are prone to a sense of unsafe， under the influence of which children may easily abandon themselves to Internet， smoking，alcohol， and even drugs due to the negligence from their busy parents

　　解析：

　　错句基本上没有问题，这种小瑕疵不大会影响文章的整体评分。这里“a sense of unsafe”中应该用名词作介词“of”的宾语，所以改为“ a sense ofInsecurity＇＂。这个句子写得很漂亮，摘出来大家可以学习ー下，这样的水平大概在7分以上。

　　①＂ living in such a circumstance”现在分词作定语，拿分点!

　　②＂ are prone to”后可跟名词构成“＂ be prone to sth＂，也可跟动词不定式构成be prone to do sth.＂，意为:“易于遭受，有做坏事的倾向”。

　　注意:此句型只用于不好的方面，好的方面可以选择用“ be likely to do sth.”;

　　③用了非限制性定语从句，“… a sense of insecurity，under the influence of which...”这样使得句子结构紧湊，逻辑清晣，是拿分的王牌句型！

　　④“due to the negligence from their busy parents”末尾的介词短语短小精悍，用得中规中矩!

　　Besides, some researches have indicatedthat children living in such a circumstance are prone to a sense of insecurity, under the influence of which children may easily abandon themselves to the Internet, smokingalcohol, and even drugs due to the negligence from their busy parents

　　另外，一些研究已表明生活在这种环境下的孩子容易有不安全感，因而在这种情况下导致孩子可能轻易地沉迷于互联网、吸烟、酒甚至吸毒，而这些都是因为忙碌的家长对孩子的忽略造成的。

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　　错误范例2

　　Childhood is the most important stage for a person's development. One's personality and characteristics formed in this period may have life-long influence for an individual.

　　解析：

　　固定搭配: to have/ exert a strong influence on/ upon sb./sth.，

　　＂ influence"既可作可数名词，也可作不可数名词

　　Childhood is the most important stage for a persons development. One'spersonality and characteristics formed in this period may have life-long influence on an individual

　　儿童时期是一个人成长的最重要阶段，在这个阶段形成的个性和性格往往会对一个人造成一生的影响。

　　词性弄错和用词不当：体育健康类话题

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　　错误范例1

　　Namely, the stronger the individuals are, the higher possibilities the team will success in a competition event.

　　解析：

　　词性弄错了，构成一般将来时的助动词“will”后面必须加动词原形，而不能用名词!

　　Namely, the stronger the individuals are, the higher possibilities the team will succeed in a competition event

　　也就是说，在竞技比赛中，队员个人越强，团队在比赛中取得成功的可能性就越大。

　　词性弄错和用词不当：工作与生活类话题

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　　错误范例1

　　Work, as the primary source of pressure, should be paid close attention first. The measurement for preventing tension in work is to make clear plans for their work with realistic goals.

　　解析：

　　①固定搭配:“sb. pay close attention to

　　sth." 变成被动语态为:“sth. be paid attention to＂，这里要牢记的是中国学生最容易出错的两个地方：其”pay”的过去式和过去分词均为paid＂；其二，介词“to”不能漏掉;

　　②这里“ measurement”用词不当，“ measurement＂为不可数名词，是“测量”的意思；而这里很明显要表达“措施，方法”的意思，所以要用“ measure＂，而 measure”的搭配为:“ measure to do sth.”。

　　Work, as the primary source of pressure, should be paid close attention to first. The measure to prevent tension in work is to make clear plans fortheir work with realistic goals.

　　我们应该首先关注工作给我们带来的主要压力。防止工作压力的措施便是制定现实的工作目标，做出明晰的工作计划。

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　　错误范例2

　　Besides, friends and families may offer them some suggestions to solve their problems.

　　解析：

　　"suggestion”的搭配为: a suggestion about/for/ on sth.

　　Besides, friends and families may offer them some suggestions about how best to tackle their problems.

　　另外，针对如何才能解决这些问题，家人和朋友可以提供最好的建议。

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