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双谓语错句:政府职能话题
错误范例1
From what has been mentioned above, there are some services such as defence capability and social security must be provided by governments
解析:
①双谓语错句,一句话当中同时出现了“are”和“ must be”两个谓语;
②改正方法:把划线部分改为定语从向即可。
From what has been mentioned above,there are some services such as defence capability and social security which must be provided by governments.
综上所述,一些国防和社会治安的服务必须由政府提供。
错误范例2
It is not only include build defence capability and urban infrastructure, but also other services like education, health and social security
解析:
①系动词“is”和实义动词“ include”同时出现;
②两个实义动词“ include”和“build”连用;
③改正方法:去掉“is",动词“ include"改为" includes”,“ build”改为" building"
It not only includes building defence capability and urban infrastructure, butalso other services like education, health and social security.
它不但包括建立国防和城市基础设施的服务,而且还有其他如教育、医疗和社会治安的服务。