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I would argue that the sharing policy related to domestic tasks between couples is not necessarily correlated with females’ occupational situations, and it is also irrational to introduce equality into the distribution of those household jobs.
Whether housework should be shared by the couples in a family has nothing to do with the occupational situation one is involved in, but depends on his or her ability to do this type of chores. Whenever the scenario appears that there are domestic tasks that women cannot do, but men are competent in, the latter should take the responsibility of doing these jobs. Even if there exists an awareness that when women have full-time jobs, their time of doing housework is limited, and it is about the time to launch a system of distribution, it is the personal capability that finally decides whether the jobs can or cannot be shared during the process. That means men and women living within a family may share their household chores from the outset regardless of the nature of work of either, or one side may have to undertake all the housework because of the insufficient capacity of the other even if the former also needs to go out and work for all day.
There is also no need to involve equality in the sharing policy of housework. Before scrutinizing whether or not housework should be distributed equally by the couples, one must first define what "equality" should be. However, it is hard to provide any credible measurement to precisely quantify the output of every piece of housework and come to an objective decision about whether those jobs are equally distributed. To say that housework can be shared evenly in quantity is unreasonable since the quantity is changing all the time. Nor could we arrange it based on energy consumption because there is no such an instrument used for examining the calories burned during the process. Therefore, even though feminists may stand up and call for equality between the two genders, one would still be out of the ability to achieve it in terms of domestic chores; they are impossible to be quantified.
In conclusion, the weak link between the premise and the suggestion made by the topic makes me question the rationality of the argument and I don't think housework can be shared equally.
相关词汇和语法结构
Correlate 相关
Irrational 不合理
Regardless 与。。无关
Competent 胜任的
Calorie 卡路里