雅思大作文写作思路及范文赏析：孩子沉迷电视不再创造

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　　报告类大作文，社会类话题

　　Studies suggest that children spend more time watching TV than they did in the past and spend less on doing active or creative things. Why do you think it is the case? What measures and methods can be used to tackle it?

　　题目来源：2016年7月9日亚太雅思大作文

　　题目大意

　　研究表明孩子比起过去花更多时间看电视而更少时间做一些积极有创造性的事。你认为为什么会这样？能采取什么措施解决这个情况？

　　写作思路解析

　　本题为典型的问原因和解决方案的报告类题目，题目内容涉及当前社会一个较为普遍的孩子沉迷看电视现象。本文对于这一现象的原因从家庭和技术发展两个角度进行分析，而解决方案也能从原因中推出。

　　关键词：

　　children spend more time watching TV   孩子花更多时间在看电视上

　　Why do you think it is the case?    为什么会这样?

　　What measures and methods can be used to tackle it?  能采取什么措施解决这个情况？

　　提纲梳理见下

　　高分写作示范

　　The advent of television has remarkably transformed the recreational methods of young children who were more into games, like hide-and-seek, in the park after school. The preference of children to appealing programmes shown on television has raised concerns about its impacts on these young viewers. The objective of this essay is to outline both the sources of the preference and appropriate approaches to cope with it.

　　From my perspective, first of all, parents should be the fist role we should blame for. Living in this competitive society, parents are either too busy for work or too exhausted afterwards to spare time or energy to accompany children. The television renders an option for them to calm their fussy children and relieve themselves at the same time. In addition, Thanks to the continuously betterment in life quality, there is a growing affordability for not only television sets but also ingenious electronic devices that the youth are able to rely on for manifold digital entertainment. As a result of that, a variety of television programmes designed for amusing and educating the young generation become children’s best company and resort at home.

　　In spite of the fact that these television programmes can enrich children’s leisure time, it must be emphasised that spending excessive time before a screen is definitely detrimental to children’s health, ranging from the short sight to the lack of outdoor activities. To encourage children to leave the couch, parents can enroll their children in some extra-curricular courses arranged by schools, communities, or some private organisations. By participating in such activities involved into more practice, children can acquire physical benefits to their growth. What’s more, parents should spend some time with their children in reading or on some outdoor activities, no matter how busy they are. The close family ties create a healthy environment for the mental development of children.

　　In conclusion, parents ought to shoulder the main responsibility for children’s increasing addiction to television. In my view, only if children are properly guided by their parents, can they fully make use of the merits offered by television.

　　相关词汇和语法结构

　　advent    出现

　　hide-and-seek  捉迷藏

　　preference     偏好

　　render        提供

　　fussy       难取悦的，爱哭闹的

　　manifold    多种多样的

　　short sight   近视

　　couch       长沙发