雅思大作文写作思路及范文：控制电影中的暴力情节

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　　The government should control the amount of violence in films on television in order to decrease the level of violent crime in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　题目来源：2017年5月20日大陆雅思大作文

　　题目大意

　　为了减少社会总暴力犯罪的程度，政府应该控制电视上电影中的暴力情节的数量。你在多大程度上同意或者不同意？

　　写作思路解析

　　➡️To what extent do you agree or disagree?在多大程度上同意或者不同意, 且题目中并没有A和B比较的内容，判定为单观点议论文，建议采用倾向型写法给出明确立场同意或不同意。

　　➡️关键词：主体对象-Government政府，政府作为主体一般要从社会层面出发进行思考，综合考虑其政策；本文立场为不同意。the amount of violence in films on television控制的方向为电视中电影中的暴力的数量，确实有孩子会受到影响，而暴力情节本身对于电影事业有重要意义；decrease the level of violent crime in society社会中犯罪的起因有很多种，不一定是电影导致的

　　➡️本文立场为不同意：

　　（1）社会中犯罪的起因是多元化的，大部分成年人在看电影并不会受到影响

　　（2）暴力情节在电影中有很重要的意义，可以减少情节会影响电影效果，引起社会不满

　　让步：部分孩子确实会模仿，所以建议对电影进行评级，对观影人设定年龄限制

　　提纲梳理见下

　　高分写作示范

　　Violence appears more often in films and televisions,and meanwhile the crimes especially juvenile delinquency are increasingly sever than ever before.Therefore, there are some people who argue that the government should decrease the amount of violence in movies on TV so as to minimize the crimes. Personally, I believe this method is meaningless as this cannot bring about the outcomes that we expected.

　　First of all, there was no direct relationship between crimes and the amount of violent plots in movies,as the culprits of lawbreaking events are diversified.In other words, most viewers who watch the violent film are adults, and they have a clear distinction between virtual reality and real life. They have a clear consciousness that the exciting parts of the film are just sensationalizing the crimes and realized by the movie’s special effects so as to expand the readership and achieve the box office success,which cannot be actualized in the daily life.

　　Moreover, violence plots have their essential effects in the films. Apart from refreshment and excitement that people can obtain from these films, what I want to mention here is the admonishing effects of violent films. Some violent plot are based on the real cases happened in world war one and two and other real conflicts, and through these plots people can directly be conscious of the consequences of war which are dire and immeasurable ,which cultivates people’s senses of crisis and make the modern people who have not experienced the war to cherish the era of peace.

　　Admittedly，the violence on TV an films can exert unfavorable influences on value systems and behaviors,especially on the young people who are not mature enough to distinguish right from wrong.It is because that if children and teenagers were exposed to massive violent films without the guidance and supervision of their parents, they would be deeply impressed by these film plots，and tend to mimic these behaviors when encountering the similar scene in the real life, by which I mean there would be more likelihood for them to commit crimes because of watching films.

　　In conclusion, it seems to me that the amount of violence on TV should not be declined. Rather than cut down the plots directly, the government should carefully grade the films according to the amount of violence and pornographic information in the films, thereby defining the age of viewers and ensuring that the children are not adversely affected, just as most western countries already did.

　　相关词汇和语法结构

　　juvenile delinquency 青少年犯罪

　　sensationalizing the crimes 夸大犯罪

　　admonishing effects 警示作用

　　Refreshment 提神

　　Immeasurable 不可估量

　　era of peace 和平年代

　　Plot 情节

　　Be exposed to 暴露于……

　　mimic  模仿

　　violence and pornographic information 黄色暴力信息