雅思大作文写作思路及7分范文：孩子面临的压力

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　　Children are facing more pressures from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

　　题目来源：2018年5月24日大陆雅思大作文

　　题目大意

　　孩子们面临越来越多来自学习，社会和商业的压力。压力的起因是什么？可以采取什么措施来减少压力？

　　写作思路解析

　　➡️What are the causes and measures原因和解决方式是什么？大作文第二种类型report说明文，全年出现8-9场，需要列出原因和解决方式，平行结构，一般采用2:2或者3:3结构，四段式。

　　➡️关键词：主体对象children孩子3-12岁；pressure压力；academic, social and commercial perspectives三个压力来源方向，学术，社会和商业（经济）

　　➡️本文针对题目中3个维度采取3:3结构

　　原因：家长过高期待（学术），激烈竞争（社会），贫穷（经济）

　　解决方式：设置合理目标；给予学生足够指导和耐心；提供奖学金

　　提纲梳理见下

 

　　高分写作示范

　　It is commonly said that there are increasing burdens on children academically, socially and commercially. Personally，I believe that the mounting pressure from domestic expectations, peer competition and impoverished background are the three main culprits for this situation.

　　First of all, many parents place numerous expectation on their children as for the academic performance. In order to achieve excellent attainment and not disappoint their parents, children have to study hard and sometimes they may struggle through impractical educational requirements from their parents, which brings huge stress to children. Besides, it is undeniable that mounting peer pressure also contributes to this problem. Due to the soaring number of  students, pupils now are facing increasingly fierce competition from peers,and in order to come out on top and succeed, they must put more effort to be well-rounded and compete against others, leading to enormous pressure on students. Another reason can be attributed to those students from impoverished background, affording expensive tuition fees and living expenses could press heavily on them. They need to work their way through college or manage for the scholarship, so this is why our next generation could possibly face financial challenge and suffer from commercial stress.

　　To ease this situation, parents should be educated to find their children’s potentials and set goals within their capability, rather than simply push them to unrealistic limits. Meanwhile, schools and teachers need to provide adequate patience and guidance for students, mitigating their psychological pressure from peers and raise healthy competition. Finally, more institutional opportunities should be offered for students, especially in developing countries so that the economical burden on poor students can be alleviated.For example，offering scholarship and student loan can be regarded as the feasible way to assist the students from underprivileged households.

　　In conclusion, it seems to me that enhancing the academic performance，providing sufficient patience and chances are the three solutions that I came up with.

　　相关词汇和语法结构

　　Peer pressure 同龄人压力

　　Culprit 罪魁祸首

　　Capability 才能

　　Commercially 商业的

　　Mounting pressure 压力山大

　　psychological pressure 心理压力

　　Impoverished 贫穷的

　　Attribute 归因于

　　academic performance 学术表现

　　underprivileged households 贫困家庭

　　student loan 助学贷款