苏州环球教育|2019年11月23日雅思写作考试权威点评分享！

　　A类小作文

　　【作文类型】表格题

　　【作文题目】:中国、美国、俄罗斯、日本和印度分别在2005年和2006年间二氧化碳排放量的对比。

　　【综合点评】小作文：动态表格题，对于这种类型的题目关键得分点在于文字表格描述的部分，考生可以参考动态图的写作方法进行相关趋势的描述，除此之外，对于部分数据可以进行筛选比较和对比。行文部分需格外注意句型替换及用词多样性。

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　　Average (per person)Amounts(Million Tons)

　　20052006Rate of Change

　　China4.8kg5600600011%

　　US19.8kg590050002%

　　Russia12kg169917000

　　India1.2kg120013008%

　　Japan9.8kg110011000

　　A类大作文

　　【作文题目】In modern age，some people think it is unnecessary to teach children the skill of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　【作文类型】倾向性观点

　　【题目分析】这个题目因为提到的是children，所以注意在行文中要重点突出此对象，可以提及由于目前和家人朋友是通过打电话或者社交软件交流居多，用手写的方式相对比较少见了，但是这种方式也不可能完全被取代。

　　【题材类别】教育类

　　【参考范文】As a result of the popularization of mobile phones and computers, the role of handwriting is less important than it used to be, both in the workplace and in daily lives. However, I still believe that children should learn and practice handwriting.

　　First of all, handwriting can facilitate children’s learning and acquisition of knowledge. When children take notes by hand in the class, they would better memorize the new informaiton. Writing seems to be slower and less efficient than typing, but it is this kind of labor that makes the learning more impressive and produtive. Praticing writing is also good exercise to develop young children’s intellgence because in this process they have to coordinate their eyes, brains and hands working together. It is worth mentioning that handwriting can help children concentrate on their study. By contrast, learnnig on the computer is more likely to be affected by various distractions such as games and cartoons, particularly for children, who have less self-control than adults.

　　Those who oppose children’s learning handwriting claim that electronic devices have dominated people’s lives and handwriting is no longer needed in the modern society. Actually this is not true because writing by hand can achieve unusual effects in some occasions. For example, when children send a postcard or a letter of apology to a friend, a hand-written letter can better express their love and care to elders.

　　Overall, I think handwriting is a basic skill that children need to learn and practice, considering its multiple benefits.