雅思机经：2019年9月12日雅思写作考试点评分析！

　　A类小作文

　　[作文类型] 三张饼状图

　　[作文题目]三年四种车过桥比例的变化

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　　[综合点评]：

　　注意考察饼图比较大小, 饼图固定搭配的句式结构等. 需要综合考量趋势和大小的特点进行整体概括.

　　A类大作文

　　[作文题目] In some countries，secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a wide range of subjects，while in others children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to particular career. Which education is appropriate for today’s world?

　　[题目分析] 讨论双方观点类作文的变型，讨论两种方式的优势并且表明个人观点

　　[题材类别] 教育类

　　[思路分析] 论点在于在初中应该普及通识教育还是专业教育，此类作文建议先摆明个人观点，倾向于通识教育还是专业教育，支持一方侧重论证，但是同时不要一边倒的绝对化，倾向通识教育可以从学生需要许多基础知识和学生中学阶段对优势特长认识不清入手，在让步段兼顾专长教育的优势。

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　　【参考范文】

　　Whether cultivating versatile students or children adept at some special subjects in middle schools is a contentious issue in this world. As for me, the former idea is more reasonable in current society.

　　Firstly, to develop students from diverse subjects will equip students with some fundamental and correct knowledge about our world. After all, education in secondary still belongs to basic education. In this phase, if a student doesn’t have access to the basis of some subjects, he will not be qualified as a citizen. For instance, without elementary historical and political education in middle school, students will lack the healthy world outlook and the recognition of their nations. As a result, they may be misled one day.

　　Secondly, general education in education will help to discover students’ real specialties. At such a young age, most students haven’t form clear conception about their advantages and hobbies, not to mention their career prospects. In this case, if school just enforce them to learn some special subjects for almost six years, that is likely to lead to catastrophe for some students’ destiny.

　　However, we must admit that concentrating on some subjects will prompt some students to develop competent skills or capacities. When they graduate, their specialty will be favored by many companies for their positions are so specific.

　　In conclusion, taking account of the command of basic knowledge on many subjects and development of students’ specialties, general education in secondary should be the list of priority in modern world. But we should not neglect the education on a special subject.