2021年10月9日托福写作【独立写作】回忆和解析含范文！

　　2021年10月9日托福写作回忆和解析含范文！本文由环球教育上海学校严春华老师整理提供，其他部分小编会在后面一一整理，供参考！​

　　独立写作

　　话题分类工作类

　　考题回忆“Imagine you are working on a group project with two coworkers and the deadline (the time that the project should be submitted) is approaching. The project looks good but could be improved if you all work on it more; however, this would mean that you miss the deadline. One of your coworkers suggests submitting the project in its current condition to meet the deadline, while your other coworker thinks it is better to wait and submit the project after the deadline so that it is perfect. Which approach is better in your opinion: meeting deadlines even if a project is not yet perfect or submitting a project after a deadline so that it is perfect? Why?”

　　解题思路写作思路：

　　要点： 可以用遵守时限的思路展开两个点再做一个让步

　　观点：同意遵守时间限定

　　1. conforming to the rule of the company is the bottom line of a qualified employee

　　2. Originality could stem from pressing demands rather than procrastination

　　3.Further inspirations can be perfected constantly and integrated into future projects

　　参考范文范文：

　　Encountering such an increasingly fierce competition, every employee in business world is sparing no effort in fulfilling every job requirement. To be more eminent or to be punctual has become such a dilemma that we need to convince our team mates to comply with the deadline with corporate cultures, core values and work ethics. From my perspective, To present work results on time is just indispensable to guarantee personal success as well as company prosperity.

　　First, to meet the deadline lays a solid foundation for a smooth and productive work performance not just for the group but also for the company as a whole. In modern corporate world, people have become so dependent on each other that if one link of the whole assembly line is broken down, almost all the department would have to suffer a devastating impact. The company would have to confront lawsuits for tremendous loss of clients and the public image  of the company might be undermined by negative coverage about how irresponsible and unreliable the company is. Just like the most sophisticated spacecraft could be ruined by those seemingly trivial details, many great companies fails because of unsatisfactory implementation, which can be traced down to many irresponsible employee who refuse to comply with company requirements such as deadline, product quality and work ethics. This is why in every job description meeting the deadline is specified as basic principle for a qualified employee, regardless of the field, rank, position and characteristics of the job.

　　Besides, more often than not, having a time pressure helps unleash our creativity and work efficacy. Necessity is the mother of invention. When we are challenged by the due time of project, we would resort to our sapience, ingenuity, and collaborative endeavors to figure out the optimum route to success. By contrast, procrastination will bury the very motivation for us to progress, leaving us even more sense of frustration simply because a higher level of perfection without a time limit will surely undermine the work organization of the whole group and company.

　　Admittedly, maybe next inspiration is the most revolutionary one, some might argue. However, even for most prominent entrepreneurs like Steve Jobs or Elon Musk, deadlines are the life line of an enterprise, because it is fulfilling promise to customers, shareholders, business partners that defines the value of a company, not lack of implementation of principles and objectives. Every employee should have acute awareness of honoring their work duties.

　　In short, to be able to meet the deadline is paramount for the surviving and thriving of an employee and his company. Constant perfection as well as rigorous execution are the corner stones for a business to prosper and last.

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