2019年8月17日雅思考试写作试题点评分享！

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　　A类小作文

　　【作文类型】柱状图

　　【作文题目】:一个欧洲城市的五个不同旅游景点从1981，1991 以及2001的游客人数的变化。

　　【综合点评】小作文：动态柱图，对于这种类型的题目关键得分点在于描述趋势部分和比较对比柱的差异性，考生可以参考以往真题中柱图的写作方法进行筛选比较，例如参考剑桥真题12Test3中的吃快餐频率，行文部分需格外注意句型替换及用词多样性，以及时态的正确运用因为此题出现了关于将来的时间。

　　A类大作文

　　【作文题目】More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets(ipad)as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

　　【作文类型】利弊分析题

　　【题目分析】这个题目偏向社会科技话题的讨论，讨论家长让孩子玩电脑和ipad谈论它带来的好处和弊端，看似比较简单的一个题目， 但是在实际写作中一定记住优缺点都需讨论到位，对于题目里的technology skills需要回应。

　　【题材类别】教育类+科技类

　　【参考范文】In the present age, it has become a popular activity for children to spend significant amounts of time on electronic devices such as computers and tablets . In my opinion, the drawbacks of allowing children to do this outweigh its advantages.

　　The obvious benefits of computer skills for children cannot be denied. Their adult world will be changing constantly in terms of technology and the Internet is the key to all the knowledge and information available in the world today. Therefore it is important that children learn at an early age to use the equipment enthusiastically and with confidence as they will need these skills throughout their studies and working lives in the future.

　　However, although many parents purchase these devices for educational purposes, many of their children use them to play games or watch entertaining videos; therefore, more problems would occur. The main problem is that these activities will keep children excessively occupied. Gamers are constantly given scores, new targets and frequent rewards to keep them playing, while many video viewers now spend hours each day watching videos for fun. That is to say, these activities are high addictive. This type of addiction leads to problems at school, when homework is sacrificed for a few more hours on the computer or console. Besides, it could also exert a negative effect on children's health. This is because sitting in front of a screen for two long can be damaging to both the eyes and the physical posture of a young children, regardless of what they are using the computer for. On the other hand, computer activities that attract children are often electronic games that tend to be very intense and rather violent, so too much exposure can be harmful to children’s mental health.

　　In conclusion, the drawbacks of allowing children to use computers and tablets outweigh the benefits. But the main point is to make sure that children do not overuse computers and tablets, and parents should closely supervise what their children use these devices for.