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10月24日托福考试机经-写作篇,含范文赏析!

2020-10-26 15:30:33编辑:景景

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  综合点评

  难度一般,争锋相对的 argue 模式。

  综合写作(参考语培及考生回忆)

  话题分类

  常见话题,生态类

  考题回忆

  总论点

  讨论濒临灭绝的 pallid sturgeon reproduce 以及如何帮助它们回游的方法

  阅读部分

  提出三个措施:

  1.改建成 larger dam,然后修建一些 side channels 可以让鱼有通道可以游上来。

  2.在小水坝上修建成带 gate 的,鱼可以从阀门里游出来。

  3.在小水坝修个 pumps system,鱼可以顺着水流游上来。

  听力部分

  这三个方法都有问题:

  1. 改建大水坝的条件有限比较苛刻,修建新的 model 有些理想化,实际可行度比较低。

  2. 冬天容易结冰,导致鲟鱼不愿意回游,结冰以后容易损伤 gates,后续还需要人们进行修理。

  3.修建这个 pumps system 需要额外的电力,famers 不太能接受这个增加的电费支出。

  解题思路

  把握住利弊争论的要点,进行细节的补充。

  参考范文

  因内容回忆不够完整,无法形成详细的范文。

  独立写作(参考网络历年范文)

  话题分类

  工作类

  考题回忆

  Which one do you think is the best way to successfully finding a job?

  1.asking friends or asking online for information on a job opening

  2.sending letters about yourself to the company you want to work for

  3.searching for advertisements from companies through different medias such as newspapers解题思路

  三选一的模式,重复 2019.10.26 旧题没有特定的哪个选项对错,下笔之前评估下哪个选项比较好写哪个

  选项思路比较充分即可,结构采取对仗或者让步都是可以的。

  参考范文

  With the fierce competition in the society, the job market becomes overwhelmingly saturated symbolizing the challenges of finding a satisfying job. Job hunters begin to improve their searching method in order to succeed. Personally speaking,I holdthe opinion that among the three popular method to find a job, asking for friends or asking online for information of job opening is the best way to achieve the goal.Not only because friends may have insight of the job and can provide a better comprehension, but also the online information can filter the jobs into different categories and directly meet the needs.

  To begin with, the online searching will largely improve the efficiency of finding a job compared with want advertisements in newspapers. To be more specific, jobs are divided into different categories and users can directly search for the fields one wants to work in. Take myself as an example, majoring in industrial design,I was expecting to find an internship in the relative field. First,I began with the newspapers and after great amounts of searching,I gave up this method for itstime consuming and chaotic arrangement in the job section. Switching to online searching, the Internet helped me divide the jobs into design related and I could easily look for the jobs I was interested in.

  What's more, Friends' experience will offer a better understanding on the jobs. To elaborate on the topic, friends in the company will have an insight on the policies of the company. Since salaries and bonus are probably where the attention goes, it would be beneficial for people to have a insider's opinion and then decide to apply for the job. According to the survey conducted in 2018, around 80 percent of the job hunters thought it would be nicer if someone introduce the companies' policy and information for them. It is true that sending letters to the company will get a more direct feedback. However, the job looking journey is not just get a job, it is concerned with choosing a satisfying job.

  Admittedly, looking for want advertisement and sending letters to the companies have advantages such as various source of information from differentiated perspectives. However, with the data base used by the Internet, job information can be obtained throughout varioussources not to mention its powerful algorithm to give the individual more direct and useful background information. Moreover, friends in the company can also provide you with first-hand experience about working in the company.

  In conclusion, though sending letters to company and searching for the advertisement have advantages over asking for friends or asking online for information to some extent. The convenience of searching online and experiences from friends will serve us better in the way of achieving success when finding a satisfying job. 

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