10月17日托福考试综合写作思路分析及范文:一种叫pika的小老鼠是否会因为全球变暖而濒危!这次托福考试写作部分整体难度适中,综合写作和独立写作都是重复之前的考题。
其中,综合写作考查综合写作动物类,重复 2016/1/23 和 2017/1/23 的题目,整体难度适中。本文为大家分享话题分析及范文
话题分类
生物类(重复 2016/1/23 和 2017/1/23)
考题回忆
总论点
一种叫 pika 的小老鼠是否会因为全球变暖而濒危。
阅读部分
分论点一:空气变热,温度升高而数量减少。
分论点二:原本在夏天收集食物,为冬天做准备。夏天温度过高,收集的食物不够。
分论点三:冰川消融, pika 没有了庇护所。
听力部分
分论点一:可以去凉快的地方,不是所有的地方都热。
分论点二:夏天吃得更少,因此有更多时间收集食物。
分论点三 : 雪 融 化 意 味 着 冬 天 即 将 结 束 。 它 们 有 更 多 的 繁 殖 机 会 , 因此pika 的数量将会恢复。
解题思路
传统四段式写作,每一段阅读内容+听力内容。
范文:
According to the passage, pikas will have the danger of becoming extinct due to global warming. In light of the lecture, however, global warming will not threaten the population of the
animal.
To begin with, the author mentions that global warming causes the rise of temperature, and overheating will lead to the death of pikas. On the contrary, to quote the lecture, the temperature varies when it comes to their habitats. Pikas will find some sheltered places which are much cooler. Therefore, the population of pikas will remain stable.
In addition, according to the passage, pikas will fail to collect and store enough food in the summer as a result of the high temperature. The lecturer opposes this statement by claiming that the high temperature in the summer would make pikas eat and consume less food, which would allow pikas to store more food for later use.
Finally, the passage indicates that snow is melting at a faster rate because of global warming, so thick layer of snow, which pikas use to protect themselves, is now disappearing. Quite the contrary, in light of the lecture, snow melting means the winter will end soon, and pikas will have more opportunities to reproduce, which will make the population of pikas recover.
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